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Tyrant Ft. Zabe -Track 13 [Official Second Single!]

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Tyrant Ft. Zabe -Track 13 [Official Second Single!]

Postby J.R. » Sep 10th, '11, 20:09

Nutz and Zabe Feed= viewtopic.php?f=24&t=125178&p=1752359#p1752359

This is also, SINGLE 2 of 3. The first was "A Hurt So rare"

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[Intro]
These "Rappers" Are tyrants...
Trying to expose our governments secrets?
THEY MUST DIE.


[Verse 1- Zabe]
Now I have secrets locked away in a big-ass vault
I open it so I can begin my lyrical assault
So think about Barack sitting in his big office
Only in the government would tax equal profit
But what about the secrets they've got hidden away?
Jay's got illuminati genes, to him the politician prays
AIDS in kids' needles, medicine that makes us ill
And if we ever find out, we're the ones to kill
I look up in the sky, all I see is copters
There's a guy stepping out of the door with a chopper
I'm shot, I'm dead, somebody impact re-vengance
Make sure that before they get killed, they feel repentance
Bash them down to the floor because there's nowhere else
And shoot them right in the head, then you gotta protect yourself
Well, I know that no matter where you ride
There's no place on this whole wide earth to hide



[Verse 2= B.Nutz]
Hahaha, Political Tyrant?
Hypocrites, Better listen to MY RANT,
Don't be dissin the time spent,
I'm only sixteen, But you better listen to my chant,
Obama is fake, And the governments a Lie,
Bombing the states, Loving the ones who die,
Only true one's left, are Zabe And I
They like to watch, Us get Hated by,The President and cops,
Said I should be Pacing I, But how? Too many Residents with glocks
Now they focus on Invading, why? It'll leave our heroes Dead or shot
And now we seem to be missing, those Star's n stripes,
Instead they make cash, to get extra Car's n Wife's,
If your bored, look up into the Stars tonight,
And realize, the missing of these, Aren't Far Behind.
Fuck it, looks like mosh and white america was right!
If we don't fight, We might as well die tonight!
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Re: Tyrant Ft. Zabe

Postby SG. » Sep 10th, '11, 20:10

Was wondering when you were going to post this. :coffee:
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Re: Tyrant Ft. Zabe -Track 13

Postby SG. » Sep 11th, '11, 14:59

BUMP!
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Re: Tyrant Ft. Zabe -Track 13

Postby J.R. » Sep 11th, '11, 16:17

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Re: Tyrant Ft. Zabe -Track 13 [Official Second Single!]

Postby Man1x » Sep 11th, '11, 19:50

Your single is being slept on hahaha, FLOP. JK, good job both you guy's, I enjoyed the concept. You both had decent structure but I felt B.Nutz shined on this one with his rhyming :y:
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Re: Tyrant Ft. Zabe -Track 13 [Official Second Single!]

Postby SG. » Sep 11th, '11, 19:52

Thanks! I'm surprised you liked my verse, it was written after Falling Away.
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Re: Tyrant Ft. Zabe -Track 13 [Official Second Single!]

Postby Man1x » Sep 11th, '11, 19:55

Well your rhyming wasn't the greatest but you had some 2+ syllables that were decent, you carried the subject good. If it was wrote after that song then you had a major improvement :y:
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Re: Tyrant Ft. Zabe -Track 13 [Official Second Single!]

Postby Man1x » Sep 11th, '11, 21:02

:o I wondering where B.Shady went, I had no idea it was B.Nutz, damn... learn something new everyday.
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Re: Tyrant Ft. Zabe -Track 13 [Official Second Single!]

Postby J.R. » Sep 12th, '11, 20:08

Added Zabe and I's EP Symbols from our sigs. :y:
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