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For Real (Bars Of Sickness Series) (Diss to 17 year old sis)

Postby Atone » Sep 13th, '11, 03:25

(Verse)
First of all, fuck your bitch assness this shit classic i go hard on you bastards
like porn for losers who don't know who their dad is
and what's sad is the fact that i'm still makin move's
while your watchin paint dry in thin grooves
i'm the champion bitch, you can't win dude
and to my whore of a sister
more like a blister
with puss from a drifter
bitch you think to highly of yourself
lower your ego, back down to the bottom shelf
you a loser with no job and your man is a punk
'you live in a dump- god damn your a skunk--
skank, sperm bank stanky ass lump
never been shit and never will be
i'm gonna do somethin with my life, but your the future you'll still be
straight out the psych ward livin with ya husbands parents with no Diploma
a highschool drop out- cop out- should i stop now? smell the aroma
it's funny how when you call nobody picks the phone up
mom aint talked to you cuz your ass still aint grown up
nowlet me move on, to a new song, to a new flow
and just go, crazy on the mic- and just throw
bar after bar and show that i can do it
fuck the rap game this shit just became a movement
for me to step up to this fuckin mic and get ruthless

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Re: For Real (Bars Of Sickness Series) (Diss to 17 year old

Postby mdemaz » Sep 13th, '11, 03:38

Lol why did you diss you sister?
Haha, nice set of bars man.
Get at me if you wanna jump on a track for my Recovery album, I still got 8 tracks to record for it.
Just email me a hook or verse bro.
Peace.
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Re: For Real (Bars Of Sickness Series) (Diss to 17 year old

Postby Atone » Sep 13th, '11, 03:42

mdemaz wrote:Lol why did you diss you sister?
Haha, nice set of bars man.
Get at me if you wanna jump on a track for my recovery album, I still got 8 tracks to record for it.
Just email me a hook or verse bro.
Peace.


cuz my sister is a dumb bitch who turned her back on everybody and only kisses ass when she wants money, cries cuz her loser ass husband can't do anything right but yet she's runnin around tellin everybody she wants to have a black baby with some other guy

she's a wrist cutter whpo's been the psych ward 3 times and dropped outta school, had a baby at the age of 16, (i don't even know the babies name cuz i really don't give a shit about the dumb bitch), but she talks so much shit about everybody else in the family and acts as if she is better than all of us, she needs to fuckin die already
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Re: For Real (Bars Of Sickness Series) (Diss to 17 year old

Postby mdemaz » Sep 13th, '11, 03:53

Atone The Underdog wrote:
mdemaz wrote:Lol why did you diss you sister?
Haha, nice set of bars man.
Get at me if you wanna jump on a track for my recovery album, I still got 8 tracks to record for it.
Just email me a hook or verse bro.
Peace.


cuz my sister is a dumb bitch who turned her back on everybody and only kisses ass when she wants money, cries cuz her loser ass husband can't do anything right but yet she's runnin around tellin everybody she wants to have a black baby with some other guy

she's a wrist cutter whpo's been the psych ward 3 times and dropped outta school, had a baby at the age of 16, (i don't even know the babies name cuz i really don't give a shit about the dumb bitch), but she talks so much shit about everybody else in the family and acts as if she is better than all of us, she needs to fuckin die already

Word, fuck that shit man.

You should probably start a new life man, you seem to get pulled into drama everywhere you go, haha.
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Re: For Real (Bars Of Sickness Series) (Diss to 17 year old

Postby Atone » Sep 13th, '11, 04:13

lol, maybe, but thats how music is made, and yeah pm me your e-mail i'll record some stuff for ya
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Re: For Real (Bars Of Sickness Series) (Diss to 17 year old

Postby mdemaz » Sep 13th, '11, 04:17

Atone The Underdog wrote:lol, maybe, but thats how music is made, and yeah pm me your e-mail i'll record some stuff for ya

Oh don't you have my email anymore?
I have you on MSN still hahaha..
Iight,.
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Re: For Real (Bars Of Sickness Series) (Diss to 17 year old

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 13th, '11, 04:34

ouch, wow, good diss but she could be suicidal
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: For Real (Bars Of Sickness Series) (Diss to 17 year old

Postby Atone » Sep 13th, '11, 04:43

Ka0t1c wrote:ouch, wow, good diss but she could be suicidal


She is suicidle lol, she's a fuckin crybaby attention whore
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Re: For Real (Bars Of Sickness Series) (Diss to 17 year old

Postby mdemaz » Sep 13th, '11, 04:45

Could be? Lmao.
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