Ego (Geno & Alieus) - Things Get Worse

[Mr.DGAF]

You got a better chance sitting down than a fat Lebanese
who cant bend his knees, incredibly DOE

For real, this was fire. Nothing much to say, really. Lyrics were definitely on point, funny shit in there.

Also, I think Alieus got the better of Geno on this one. Which is impressive because Geno came hard on this one.

[SajN]

This was even worse than Fack, tbh.

[J.R.]

You guys always kill everything.

I jelly..


Good job, extremely dope.

[J.R.]

Thanks. Which verse killed it most do you think?

The last verse by you.

Definitely for these 4 lines

He'll give you bitches a hiatus, he's so vicious yet creative,
His initiative is fated to sit up with the greatest,
His mission isn't blatant, it's a ruse to confuse you,
So he can boost through you stupid fools with ghouly voodoo,


G.O.A.T

[Wreck]

Yo this was fucking sick. Dope, creative wordplay, amazing multies, and even humor was thrown in there like the kitchen sink . Hope I can collab you with you guys, any/both of you, in the future. Sick all around though, props to you 2/you split-personality fucks .

9.5/10

[Wreck]

Thanks Wreck

You know how it is, hit either one of us (or both if you want) with a beat and/or concept and we'll go straight to the "lab". I'm sure Geno would enjoy a collab as much as I would.

Got it, we straight. I'll PM you soon on here, both of you's at the same time about bouncing around some concepts/song ideas, beats for it, etc.

I would more cause y'all are sick lol, but I'm jp though. I can assume that y'all are a rap duo/a rap group then, yes? Just curious. And if so, you got a name for your group?

But yeah, I'm thinking about a dope, deep concept definitely, not just an everyday "just spittin track;" even though I know lyricism will still be over the top on it.

We onn

[ChristinaE12]

This fuckin sucks and you both should quit now..






Where to start...

First, I'll just say you guys really work well together. You seem to bring the best out of each other. Which makes all your work that much better. Cause it actually goes together and meshes well. Nothing seems out of place.

Your multies are definitely on point. Both of yours. The only thing I could say to do now is just play around with different rhyme schemes more although you pretty much are anyways. But just changing that up to keep things fresh.

You have a great mix of lyrics.. Seriousness and humor throughout the whole piece.

Structure is great as well as the flow from what I could tell.

You guys should definitely try to record though. You could make these pieces that much better.

Oh.. and was there shots fired?? Or am I imagining it? lol.

[Sam.]

Dope shit you two .

Genzo my man's that was dope shit there .Humor was the most out lining thing here which was executed well .

I could see the shots that were fired ,:| I don't want the dick doe .This all was said while keeping the Rhymes safe and unforced .

Menzo needs to work on his structure a little.
&
The vocab that you too use is mind blowing.

Chk my shit bro's .
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[Sam.]

Thanks Sam, ha, I had a feeling the structure would be mentioned lol I'm not much of a structure focused writer, I write for my own flow but I understand it's much more enjoyable for the reader if it's a smooth looking flow for them to follow. I will try to focus a bit on flow in the near future though!

I'll peep your shit

Structure can be ignored if you can make it flow nicely by adding multis in them ,see for example :Game made a 500 bar song ,chk the lyrics the structure is fucked up but the songs flowed nicely .

Structure seems different on Paper and on Notepad ,depends where you write it on .

Matter of fact you don't have to go that far tbh ,you can check Geno's verse he usually has perfect structure .

[Devil'sAdvocate]

wait a second,who dissed me?

is it menzo or geno,i dont know who the fuck is alieus

[Devil'sAdvocate]

Alieus is the one who wrote the bars directed at me,Who the fuck is Alieus?

Do i seem like i give too much of a fuck,it would be just cool to know,and if im an idiot then calling you anything would be retarded.

[Devil'sAdvocate]

Alieus is the one who wrote the bars directed at me,Who the fuck is Alieus?

Do i seem like i give too much of a fuck,it would be just cool to know,and if im an idiot then calling you anything would be retarded.

Far from it,mad would be Geno calling me an idiot,pretty fucking insane tbh.

[Devil'sAdvocate]

After going through the thread it seems that Alieus is Menzo and he threw the shot if so,then fuck it,he gets a pass for being friends with me anyway.

Proceed.

[Wreck]

I wanna be in Ego, y'all are sick .

Fcuk the haters man!

[Man1x]

Dope verse and who invited DA here haha ?