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[LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Mr.DGAF

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[LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Mr.DGAF

Postby J.R. » Sep 15th, '11, 21:22

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[B.Nutz]
Yo, it's a little too late to say I miss you,
Been a while now and I didn't put it off to diss you,
Someone hand me a tissue, Gonna rip apart my internal issues,
You know I always Loved you, Seems like you were All I had,
Best friend I had Dubbed you, When you died, I was in awe and mad,
What I saw was sad, An item I wish I'd kept,
Sounds sad, But you basically left,
God called you up, You had no choice but to accept,
Mom saw enough, Call me moist but I fucking wept,
I remember when you was Buried, I Cried and sighed,
It was you that I Carried, Why'd you have to Go on and die,
Now you're forever in my memory, and it killing me,
Got a letter from Family, And it hurts them still you see?
I love you, and I wish I wasn't so young when I knew you,
I just think I was so dumb and clueless, Look through to-
My heart, It's basically gone and Shattered in pieces,
Missing you? A Nice start, But he got Aggravated and Ceases,
To believe it, and He stands at your grave, Screaming at god,
How could he conceive this? It's mental rape, Fuck it if I sound soft..


[Chorus]
Every time I think,
About the times we spent,
Together, Forever, the pain amends,
and all the time we hurt,
For each other's worth,
It's too late for this.



[Mr.DGAF]

During the nights, I’d think
About the times we shared
For in the fights, we’d blink
And now we both not there
I gotta make this clear
Know that I still miss you
I try to break this fear
So bad it kills my mood
Because I wouldn’t be here
And that’s nothing but true
He was too good and he cared
Grand-dad trust that I do
Pray for you every night
Just like I know you would too
Say you’re too happy, alright
For you I wrote this tribute





[Chorus]
Every time I think,
About the times we spent,
Together, Forever, the pain amends,
and all the time we hurt,
For each other's worth,
It's too late for this.
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Zabe and Mr.DGAF

Postby SG. » Sep 15th, '11, 21:27

YOU BASTARD! You said I was on topic... :angry:
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Zabe and Mr.DGAF

Postby Man1x » Sep 15th, '11, 21:55

Zabe wrote:YOU BASTARD! You said I was on topic... :angry:



:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

I haven't even read it yet but something tells me that Zabe's verse is going to look retarded


EDIT: AND I WAS RIGHT HAHAHA. YA'LL GOT THAT EMOTIONAL, DEEP SHIT AND HE TALKIN' ABOUT VIDEO GAMES AND SEX!!! THAT'S SOME LIL WAYNE SHIT RIGHT THERE!!!!! :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

Zabe goes in like goin
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Zabe and Mr.DGAF

Postby SG. » Sep 15th, '11, 22:00

Seriously, BN, remove my verse, I'll pay you back later.
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Zabe and Mr.DGAF

Postby Man1x » Sep 15th, '11, 22:02

Nah, I'm joking homie it was okay, just didn't fit
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Zabe and Mr.DGAF

Postby SG. » Sep 15th, '11, 22:03

That's exactly why I want it gone. I thought the topic was about hobbies or some shit.
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Zabe and Mr.DGAF

Postby Man1x » Sep 15th, '11, 22:05

I think it's funny, it feels like you pulled a young money
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Zabe and Mr.DGAF

Postby SG. » Sep 15th, '11, 22:07

Eminememy wrote:I think it's funny, it feels like you pulled a young money

I had a nightmare about that once. Weird that it's happening now...
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Zabe and Mr.DGAF

Postby Man1x » Sep 15th, '11, 22:09

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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Zabe and Mr.DGAF

Postby J.R. » Sep 15th, '11, 22:11

Zabe wrote:
Eminememy wrote:I think it's funny, it feels like you pulled a young money

I had a nightmare about that once. Weird that it's happening now...

First off, You did fine. You actually brought the track some variety. :y:
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Zabe and Mr.DGAF

Postby SG. » Sep 15th, '11, 22:13

No really, I can no longer bring myself to read this with that shit at the end.

CEASE AND DESIST!
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Zabe and Mr.DGAF

Postby Man1x » Sep 15th, '11, 22:13

B.Nutz wrote:
Zabe wrote:
Eminememy wrote:I think it's funny, it feels like you pulled a young money

I had a nightmare about that once. Weird that it's happening now...

First off, You did fine. You actually brought the track some variety. :y:


I'm not saying it was bad ( and I know Zabe didn't mean for it to be that way ) I just thought it was funny
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Mr.DGAF

Postby J.R. » Sep 15th, '11, 22:15

You won't get back in my LP, spots are taken homie.

Through a chorus together though.
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Mr.DGAF

Postby SG. » Sep 15th, '11, 22:17

No problem, someday I'll be back. I might throw together a chorus if you send me something.

And thanks for removing that. :sweating: I am considerably less depressed now.
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Re: [LP Track 3] Too late for this Ft. Mr.DGAF

Postby Mr.DGAF » Sep 15th, '11, 22:31

Good shit B.Nutz. Really felt the emotion on this one. Even still, the rhyming was pretty good. Internal multis and solid multis. But the high point on your verse is the emotion, which I figured it would be given the type of track. Funny how similar our verses ended up. Favorite part:

God called you up, You had no choice but to accept,
Mom saw enough, Call me moist but I fucking wept,


Zabe, sucks your verse was dropped. For what it was, I liked it. Granted, it didn't gel with the other verses too well, but ultimately it was a fun verse. And haha, fellow nerdish guy here. :y:
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