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Re: Ego - Rude Awakening

Postby RainMan44 » Sep 14th, '11, 23:25

I agree with GameTheory on this one. Not much to critique. Bottom line, it was fucking dope as fuck. Every line was great, it was like a roller coaster...just kept goin' and goin' and goin'. Reminded me of "Welcome 2 Hell"....were y'all influenced by that for this particular track?

Anyway, I love the fact it's a no hook, raw rap, straight spitting track. Good shit from both of you. Keep it up with the dope drops :b:
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Re: Ego - Rude Awakening

Postby Man1x » Sep 16th, '11, 00:15

Damn, I wish I could write like this. Only thing I'd say it needs a hook then it's ready to be recorded imo :y:

I really can't find any big or small flaws, it all flowed amazing and the rhymes were dope. Damn... Y'all just set a major bar
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Re: Ego - Rude Awakening

Postby Man1x » Sep 16th, '11, 00:55

Well if a hook would have detracted then by all means leave it out. I'd only add one in to put more depth in it but if It wouldn't, screw a hook. I liked it
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Re: Ego - Rude Awakening

Postby SliK » Sep 16th, '11, 17:15

Great drop, nothing really to critique... and that first verse was great. One of the best flowing rhymes I've read. :y:
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