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Re: Ego (Geno & Alieus) - Things Get Worse

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 16th, '11, 00:07

you guys had some creative funny shit, and real shit that i liked, good collab
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Ego (Geno & Alieus) - Things Get Worse

Postby Wreck » Sep 16th, '11, 01:03

Geno wrote:Not a collab, we a group homie. :wave:

And thanks!


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Re: Ego (Geno & Alieus) - Things Get Worse

Postby Emadyville » Sep 16th, '11, 04:11

ok you both wrecked it lyrically, flow seemed good throughout, easy to follow so to speak :happy:

using antidisestablishmentarism or whatever will never work cause it'll always make people think of ems line :sweating:

but geno that "broke her tits" line had me crackin up :laughing:

good work as always guys :worship:
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Re: Ego (Geno & Alieus) - Things Get Worse

Postby Sam. » Sep 16th, '11, 13:59

Menzo wrote:It's a shame I showed Em that antidisestablishmentarianism line before I got a chance to use it, oh well. :shifty:

Maybe now you should change your rank to Eminem's Ghost Writer . :shifty:
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Re: Ego (Geno & Alieus) - Things Get Worse

Postby RainMan44 » Sep 16th, '11, 20:11

I liked the others you guys did moreso than this one, but this was still dope nonethless :y:

My favorite part had to be

"Think we’re done but it gets worse
Geno and Alieus meets evil and craziness
At least as long as our meds work"


I think it started kind of slow, and you guys picked it up towards the end.


Overall, I've seen better from y'all...but it's still one of the better pieces up here.

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"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Re: Ego (Geno & Alieus) - Things Get Worse

Postby RainMan44 » Sep 16th, '11, 22:48

Menzo wrote:
RainMan44 wrote:I liked the others you guys did moreso than this one, but this was still dope nonethless :y:

My favorite part had to be

"Think we’re done but it gets worse
Geno and Alieus meets evil and craziness
At least as long as our meds work"


I think it started kind of slow, and you guys picked it up towards the end.


Overall, I've seen better from y'all...but it's still one of the better pieces up here.

:b:


Thanks for the feed homie, and I'm glad you like that part of the song - I'd like to add (for my own sake lol) that those specific bars were supposed to essentially rhyme like:

Think we're done but it gets worse
Geno and Alieus meets evil and craziness
At least as long as our meds work

It's a bit of a stretch but if this were audio, it'd be more distinct. Regardless, thanks for checking the piece man :worship:



Oh shit, didn't catch that. Makes it that much better to me haha


Yo I'm down to do a text collab with you guys if y'all are down? Just can't seem to think of any concepts at this moment so I thought maybe a collab will help my mind open up a bit.
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Re: Ego (Geno & Alieus) - Things Get Worse

Postby RainMan44 » Sep 16th, '11, 23:02

Geno wrote:We've got a couple on the table atm, but we're always open to work as long as you're not wack. :o

The best way to interest us is to PM us with a beat (concept would be helpful as well, but it's optional).

So if you wanna, you know what to do. :smoking:



I'd like to think I'm not wack ;)

Haha on the real though, I'm in class right now, so most websites are blocked (TR isn't...Thank God) so I can't find a beat at the moment.


I'll hit y'all up sometime this weekend with a PM :y:
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Re: Ego (Geno & Alieus) - Things Get Worse

Postby RainMan44 » Sep 16th, '11, 23:13

Menzo wrote:Sounds good homie.

Can't wait man :smoking:
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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