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Shorts Ft. Eminememy [Track 6 on LP]

Postby J.R. » Sep 16th, '11, 01:11

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[Verse 1- B.Nutz= Underlined, Em= Bold]
Looking back, I remember it well, Your face is clear
Our BBQ, Cooking snacks, Our past? Let's Trace it dear
I was busy All the time, I kept on running away,
What was on my mind? Lied every single day..

Dreadfully dismayed I would lie through my teeth/
But that's the past, this is anew, that glued and seeped/
Into my mind, kicked away rules, passed groves in streets/
Masked my own defeats, building a glass house of peace



[Hook- Eminememy]


Not living to die/
Going to survive this life/
Not living to die/
Going to stiffen my cry/
Not living to die/
Going to survive this life/
Not living to die/
Going to stiffen my cry/
Not living to die/
Not living to die/

[Verse - B.Nutz = U. Em= B]
So, Let's travel back, Way before my Mind was lack,
Been trying to Unravel that, My sinister side Had his laugh,
Remember when I used to say, "B.Nutz, Bigger than a set of D. Cups?"
Figured out the fiend was us, Stop the song I've seen enough..

I just keep snuffin' the fucking flame, nothing else will be blamed/
Running into this game, spun on into the lane, drummin' up some fame/
Left the gun range in hope for a better life, not gonna let me die/
Now, wanna bet I'm fly? I'm not high, and I'm living a fun and happy life




[Hook- B.Nutz]


Not living to die/
How do I survive my mind?
Not living to die/
Going to fight my lies/
Not living to die/
How do I survive my mind?/
Not living to die/
Going to fight my lies/
Not living to die/
Not living to die/
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Re: Shorts Ft. Eminememy [Track 6 on LP]

Postby Man1x » Sep 16th, '11, 01:44

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Re: Shorts Ft. Eminememy [Track 6 on LP]

Postby J.R. » Sep 16th, '11, 01:48

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Re: Shorts Ft. Eminememy [Track 6 on LP]

Postby Man1x » Sep 16th, '11, 01:54

Solid line bro, I really enjoyed it
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Re: Shorts Ft. Eminememy [Track 6 on LP]

Postby Man1x » Sep 16th, '11, 19:13

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Re: Shorts Ft. Eminememy [Track 6 on LP]

Postby Sam. » Sep 16th, '11, 19:34

Good collab d00ds.

Content wise this was a close one ,but technically emy took it ,what i mean is his multis game was crazy .I loved the flow of B.Nutz part :worship:especially the 1st verse was awesome B.Nutz.

Emy last part had some major flow issues,I tried hard but at last had to settle with the slow Spoonfull type of flow for this.

Keep at it . :y: :y:
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Re: Shorts Ft. Eminememy [Track 6 on LP]

Postby Man1x » Sep 16th, '11, 22:18

Ill work on flow then :y:
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Re: Shorts Ft. Eminememy [Track 6 on LP]

Postby Man1x » Sep 17th, '11, 15:38

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