Dying for respect (Shoutout to Geno and C.R.E.A.M.)

[Mr.DGAF]

I've been feeling kinda shitty with my progression as a writer, so I wrote this to get some of it off of my chest. Hopefully it's good, maybe better than my other shit. There's a shout-out to some other writers on here, maybe it'll get me more looks? Haha.



Experimentally, I’m quick to see, that quitting simply isn’t me
It just can’t be, you feeling me? I’m killing you, you weak emcee
Your lines are bleak, fuck all your peeps, I’m jumping you with rapid speed
And rabbit feet, so grab at me, or stab at me, you faggot G
I’m mad at the, and sad at she, the baddest deeds, are had for free
The raddest piece is savagely, destroying, it’s a masterpiece
Why can’t that be me on your feed, just tell me what I need to be
For me to be like Geno, or be rhyming like I’m C.R.E.A.M. though
Double timing is a dream, oh I am flying through these e-notes
Reading rhyming books for keen flows, But my lines you’ll never see so
What’s the hope in all these studies, make some buddies? Please just love me
It gets ugly if you fuck me, check my words, tell me they’re lovely
If they aren’t then shit gets bloody, if ya shun me, then I’m done, B
So don’t run me ‘round your block, either I am hot or I am not
Trying some rocks to get me shocked, Dying for shots, I cannot stop
I had a line but I forgot, shit then I guess it’s time to drop


Feed:http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=125954

[J.R.]

This is really good, And I'm actually liking it alot more because you gave two shoutouts to My personal favorite person to collab with, and someone I'd make 2923923 lp's with.

[Mr.DGAF]

This is really good, And I'm actually liking it alot more because you gave two shoutouts to My personal favorite person to collab with, and someone I'd make 2923923 lp's with.

Thanks a lot man. And yeah, they're two of the best I see on the forum when it comes to writing. I know I left other good writers out, but to me, those were the best, and hopefully I'll reach that level some day.

[Mr.DGAF]

I don't like to brag (outside my writing), but I think you're very near "my level", so to speak.

This was really good. Littered with multies, which allowed me to pick up the flow easily. Your lyrics hit your concept home beautifully and you shouted me out so..

Haha I like this. Maybe we can collab or something.

That means a lot, thanks. To be honest I don't think I've ever gotten close to writing something like this before, but seeing you and Menzo's recent drops inspired me.

And definitely man, I'm down.

[Mr.DGAF]

No problem homie, this is the best I've seen from you for sure. Keep it up.

For a collab, PM me and Menzo with a beat and a concept and we'll be down. We might need a breather from our EP, so it could be refreshing if you hit us up ASAP.

And I'm glad I could inspire you! That means a lot to me.

Alright, I'll be thinking of something for sure. Depending on how much work I've got, I may be able to get something out to you guys this weekend. So I'll definitely hit you guys up as quickly as I can.

[Mr.DGAF]

We'll be waiting

Ended up with an idea quicker than I thought. It's been sent.

[iain08]

it sounds like celph's flow on ripped to shreds.

[Mr.DGAF]

it sounds like celph's flow on ripped to shreds.

Haven't heard it, is that a good thing?

[RainMan44]

If I'm not mistaken, this is the first piece I've ever read from you, and....if you consider yourself a beginner or anything like that, this is FUCKING DOPE

Man when I just started I would rhyme shit like "boom" and "room" and "broom"


You got countless multies flowing throughout the whole verse beautifully.


It flows nice as fuck.

The concept is cool, and you executed it very well.

Good stuff, keep at it man



EDIT: Hit me up for a collab if you down. Right now I'm in class (haha) and can't really think about a concept...but if you got one just PM if you're down bro

[iain08]

it sounds like celph's flow on ripped to shreds.

Haven't heard it, is that a good thing?

Yee

[Mr.DGAF]

If I'm not mistaken, this is the first piece I've ever read from you, and....if you consider yourself a beginner or anything like that, this is FUCKING DOPE

Man when I just started I would rhyme shit like "boom" and "room" and "broom"


You got countless multies flowing throughout the whole verse beautifully.


It flows nice as fuck.

The concept is cool, and you executed it very well.

Good stuff, keep at it man



EDIT: Hit me up for a collab if you down. Right now I'm in class (haha) and can't really think about a concept...but if you got one just PM if you're down bro

Haha definitely man, I'm actually just starting a collab with Ego, but after that has wrapped up, we'll definitely work something out.

[RainMan44]

If I'm not mistaken, this is the first piece I've ever read from you, and....if you consider yourself a beginner or anything like that, this is FUCKING DOPE

Man when I just started I would rhyme shit like "boom" and "room" and "broom"


You got countless multies flowing throughout the whole verse beautifully.


It flows nice as fuck.

The concept is cool, and you executed it very well.

Good stuff, keep at it man



EDIT: Hit me up for a collab if you down. Right now I'm in class (haha) and can't really think about a concept...but if you got one just PM if you're down bro

Haha definitely man, I'm actually just starting a collab with Ego, but after that has wrapped up, we'll definitely work something out.

Sounds great bro

[Mr.DGAF]

it sounds like celph's flow on ripped to shreds.

Haven't heard it, is that a good thing?

Yee

That was hot man, much appreciated.