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Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby J.R. » Sep 15th, '11, 23:50

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[Intro- Eminem]
And I can't wait til I catch all you faggots in pub-pub-public....I'ma....I'ma love it
*Buzzes out*

[Verse 1- B.Nutz]

Hahah, fuck my two cents, fuck your two cents,
Shucks, Apparently I'm a nusiance, Well excuse this,
Fuck you, Never gave two queefs about Your thoughts,
It's me your Stuck to,Yeah, I'm Sure shocked,
It's not Luck dude, My heart is pure? Not.
Go on, chump sue, Meanwhile, Suck your Whore's cock.
Turn the page, and you'll learn it's this Game, he craves.
This Worm is crazed, Leave you pussies Dazed, and shaved
C.R.E.A.M And I? Yeah, we're Here to stay,
Seems you guys could be queer or gay,
After this game's demise, You'll fear the name,
Your raps are lame, they just seer my brain,
Fuck your Stupid brains, You've ethered the game,
Rap is dead, By you it was fapped to death,
It's you we should Snatch instead, Yeah! Snap his neck
Fuck the times, We've laughed and wept, I've snapped and left.


[Chorus- Eminem]
I'm just a regular guy, I don't know why all the fuss about me..
Nobody ever gave a fuck before, all they did was doubt me,
Now everybody wanna run they mouth, and try to take shots at me..




[Verse 2- Gametheory]
Let me show you the mind ruiling this crooked head
Lurid spit, rude lyrics just wrecking every foolish bitch
I'm bout to bomb your set, I won't respect your horrid raps
My vualted tracks will storm your plans on making it on momma's Pad
You emo bitches struggle to draw or paint a picture
Your lack of variety makes you cuddle bricks and faint with liquor?
Maybe your brain is missing, and your main focus is lyricism
You think that them listeners like to always hear you bitching in em?
I'll tell you what, you children. learn to make them interested
Cause when Biggie went and left us people getting superstitious
Thinking that they're rapping deep and they pack the heat when passion-less
I'm laughing, shit. These faggots claiming sadness, they ain't having it
But we got everything in stock from subject matters to concepts
In contests, we rock shit, we're powerful and hard, bitch!
And our rhyming bringing seizures to wreckless of creatures
Bring it, it's B.Nutz and Cream, we'll definitely defeat ya
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby BigBoss » Sep 15th, '11, 23:52

i like it, chill with the "ft EMinem" stuff tho. its fkn wierd
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby J.R. » Sep 15th, '11, 23:54

SWEET_TOOTH wrote:i like it, chill with the "ft EMinem" stuff tho. its fkn wierd

Actually, I've only featured em in one other track. Lmao, and that was my second one? :laughing:

Whatever, thanks tho. :y:
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby BigBoss » Sep 15th, '11, 23:59

B.Nutz wrote:
SWEET_TOOTH wrote:i like it, chill with the "ft EMinem" stuff tho. its fkn wierd

Actually, I've only featured em in one other track. Lmao, and that was my second one? :laughing:

Whatever, thanks tho. :y:


you kno what i mean, people who do that are like wack faggots on youtube who rap with a eminem verse thinking their cool (inb4mahmood)

i know its just text right now but u get what i mean? dont use famous artists or whatever, its wierd :n:

i did like yours and Gametheory verses tho
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby J.R. » Sep 16th, '11, 00:01

SWEET_TOOTH wrote:
B.Nutz wrote:
SWEET_TOOTH wrote:i like it, chill with the "ft EMinem" stuff tho. its fkn wierd

Actually, I've only featured em in one other track. Lmao, and that was my second one? :laughing:

Whatever, thanks tho. :y:


you kno what i mean, people who do that are like wack faggots on youtube who rap with a eminem verse thinking their cool (inb4mahmood)

i know its just text right now but u get what i mean? dont use famous artists or whatever, its wierd :n:

i did like yours and Gametheory verses tho


Yeah, I get you. Fuck mahmoud, he dissed me...and rhymed 3 times the whole track. XD.

And yeah, the Em stuff is just for a chorus, I needed one. I suck at it, and I can't really have C.R.E.A.M do the verses and chorus. First, it's asking alot. And it's fucked up since it's my LP, so I would rather do that. :y:
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby J.R. » Sep 16th, '11, 00:25

Btw, Thanks man.


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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby SG. » Sep 16th, '11, 11:46

This was great. Liked the multis, topic and the Em chorus. Great work. :y:
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby Sekou » Sep 16th, '11, 13:15

How did you manage to get Eminem on your EP? :o :confusion:
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby Sam. » Sep 17th, '11, 14:50

TBH ,it sucks begging for feed here now ,no one feeds you until you do .
Grow up people .

-On Topic-

B.Nutz.

Another swagged out track by you man ,really it's good but I would like to read some thing different from you . The only thing is you need to write some thing different .There are some really good lines but overall they lack the shine that I saw in your other tracks tbh .Multis were dope throughout and flow was amazing here .Sorry I am a bit disappointed .


GameTheory
Looks like you really worked on this a lot ,no wonder this is so good .I liked every single bit of it .You managed to keep me Interested throughout the whole verse ,there was no point in the verse that i felt like saying it's just okay .B.Nutz your verse was also interesting bruv . :b:

Maybe your brain is missing, and your main focus is lyricism
You think that them listeners like to always hear you bitching in em?
I'll tell you what, you children. learn to make them interested
Cause when Biggie went and left us people getting superstitious
Thinking that they're rapping deep and they pack the heat when passion-less


This is the portion that I liked the most .

But again :coffee: I would love to see some shit different from you although this was different .
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby J.R. » Sep 17th, '11, 14:58

Thanks man,

So, when you Say "Different" , would you mean a new subject?

If so, watch out for all my friends, Mirror Mirror and Never like you Ft. Master chief. All are extremely different.
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby Sam. » Sep 17th, '11, 15:06

B.Nutz wrote:Thanks man,

So, when you Say "Different" , would you mean a new subject?

If so, watch out for all my friends, Mirror Mirror and Never like you Ft. Master chief. All are extremely different.


Yes, definitely .

You see if you always talk about how great you are then it would suck so you gotta say some thing about being broke and down or even some emo shit at times .(Just an example)

Looking forward to MC'S track more tbh ,he is a sick writer . :y:
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby J.R. » Sep 17th, '11, 15:11

Sam. wrote:
B.Nutz wrote:Thanks man,

So, when you Say "Different" , would you mean a new subject?

If so, watch out for all my friends, Mirror Mirror and Never like you Ft. Master chief. All are extremely different.


Yes, definitely .

You see if you always talk about how great you are then it would suck so you gotta say some thing about being broke and down or even some emo shit at times .(Just an example)

Looking forward to MC'S track more tbh ,he is a sick writer . :y:


I'm actually gonna work on a track about my Emo Past to be honest. :coffee:
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby Sam. » Sep 17th, '11, 15:17

Don't share to the limit about that past that it doesn't stay personal any more .

^ That's the advice that I would give to you . (and myself too) :y:
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby J.R. » Sep 17th, '11, 15:19

Sam. wrote:Don't share to the limit about that past that it doesn't stay personal any more .

^ That's the advice that I would give to you . (and myself too) :y:

Sorry about how slow I was returning your feed, but I got on too it. That has to be some of the best work I've read around here. Damn. :y:
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Re: Two Cents Ft. Gametheory & Eminem [Track 2 LP]

Postby Sam. » Sep 17th, '11, 15:39

B.Nutz wrote:
Sam. wrote:Don't share to the limit about that past that it doesn't stay personal any more .

^ That's the advice that I would give to you . (and myself too) :y:

Sorry about how slow I was returning your feed, but I got on too it. That has to be some of the best work I've read around here. Damn. :y:

No shit breh ,I read your comments at the Lounge and I knew you feed me and also some where you said about returning feed later this week .

So it's all good. :smoking:
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