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Comfort [TRACK 4]

Postby SG. » Sep 15th, '11, 22:14

[Intro (Sung)]

It's been a long time
But I never gave you credit for what you did
You saved my life
And I didn't even bother to thank you at all
And in the times when I'm feeling sad and lonely
I look at you and smile always

*DRUMROLL*

[Verse 1]

My life's been chronicled in so many ways
Only been rapping recent but you didn't change
You accepted it, and didn't try to change my mind
Others rejected it, and that right there was when I'd find
You waiting for me, always waiting to comfort me
I took you for granted because I was frontin' for me
I never actually once ever said "thank you"
Well here it is, the most pivotal moment for Zabe Matthews
There's a reason I call you "Conscience"
You tell me right or wrong, and not once
Did you ever ridicule me, fuck me over
Not like the ones in school, don't think they're sober
When I first met you, I thought my life was hell
Fostered into a family of farmers and shells
You weren't no shell, you were the vibrant one
Again I say thank you, for now my life moves on

[Chorus (Sung)]

And it's so simple to think that so long ago
I was another lonely guy with nowhere to go
And I'm here, now I've got you
You made me, and I love you

[Verse 2]

Actually, not quite finished yet, I need a verse to finish this
I've been going through this life caged to imprisonment
And I can't actually rap any good
Don't know why you had faith in me that I always could
Well actually you laughed it off but still encouraged me in a way
So I still had self-confidence that I could keep rapping every day
So remember that I love you
I'd be nothing in this world without you

[Chorus (Sung)]

And it's so simple to think that so long ago
I was another lonely guy with nowhere to go
And I'm here, now I've got you
You made me, and I love you

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Re: Comfort [TRACK 4]

Postby Man1x » Sep 15th, '11, 23:49

I'ma feed you later bro gotta do work but I'll hit you back
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Re: Comfort [TRACK 4]

Postby SG. » Sep 16th, '11, 17:22

No problem, take your time.

By the way, did you want an extension of the deadline for the collab?
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Re: Comfort [TRACK 4]

Postby SG. » Sep 17th, '11, 15:10

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Re: Comfort [TRACK 4]

Postby Sam. » Sep 17th, '11, 15:22

:y:
Good shit man ,real personal touch to this and very meaningful .
The 1st verse was pretty decent and was and you manged to say what you wanted to properly .The rhyming was off at places .

Clever start to the 2nd verse but you didn't end it well . :shakehead:
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Re: Comfort [TRACK 4]

Postby Man1x » Sep 17th, '11, 15:35

It was meaningful, verse 1 had the superiority in all regards however, Sam really has said what I was going to. Oh and I wasn't feeling the hook but I could it being better with vocals and it could be catchy, depends on the delivery on that one. In regards of deadline, give me til Sunday
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Re: Comfort [TRACK 4]

Postby SG. » Sep 17th, '11, 16:01

I'll be honest, verse 2 was to lengthen it out.
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Re: Comfort [TRACK 4]

Postby Man1x » Sep 17th, '11, 20:00

Yea, try not to write unless it adds to the piece, if not it only detracts. Anyway, your gettin' better. Keep crackin'
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