The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby SG. » Oct 11th, '11, 16:57

[Chorus x2 - Zabe]

They say errbody mad
Off the radar like Trinidad
I'd lose my head with this
In TR Mad District

[Verse 1 - Zabe]

Welcome to crazy avenue, where we already got the news
You arrive here, we beat the sanity out of you
You're lying out, crying out "why do you got to be cruel?"
Sorry to say it, but we're boycotting your rules
I'm white, and I don't say it because that's not right
But you all get your points up and get banned for life!
So shut the **** up with your ******* bull****, fool
**** me, **** them and **** all of you too
All of you walking round, start attacking Geno
When really it's all of you who have the massive Ego
So yeah... fuck it, errbody mad
In order to justify it, you split the board in half
Where I been? Still mixing in the lab
Come back and I notice there's friction aimed at staff
This was such a good thing, you had to go and split this
Come with us, guys, let us show you the Mad District

[Interlude]

Hater: Why you bringing Geno up all the time, man? Everybody hates that guy, look at him and his long hair!

Zabe: Hey, guess what? Guess what? U MAD

[Chorus x2 - Zabe]

They say errbody mad
Off the radar like Trinidad
I'd lose my head with this
In TR Mad District

[Verse 2 - JamaicanPattlez]

There once was a land that was safe for a Stan,
And man, it was grand, but somethin' evil was planned,
Don't know what it was, but cuz, beefing was everywhere,
Felt like it's a month and some are queefin' from derriere, 
And Game got banned, so Trio didn't drop writtens, 
But fuck the pain cause he's back, and we know we rock, bitches,
This section has battles, unraveled by lyrical tackles,
But the question that really matters is "Who's this satirical Pattlez?"
It's like a cartoon, and I swoon over some wack crap,
I must have some racks, cause I'm a coon with this! (laugh track!)
I forget that that hit might get me in a lot of trouble, shit!
They know I can't spit, frick, get to the chopper, quick! 
And you're about as fun as farts and jars of some tear gas,
Hearing that made me barf so grab a mic and get eargasms,
All you rage crazily and get a classic on page two,
Now how ironic is this, I guess you made me mad too.

[Interlude]

Hater: Ayo man, I hate your drops in CW, faggot. 

JamaicanPattlez: Yeah, but why U Mad though?

[Chorus x2 - Zabe]

They say errbody mad
Off the radar like Trinidad
I'd lose my head with this
In TR Mad District

LOF: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=130120
http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=130683

Image
Last edited by SG. on Oct 11th, '11, 17:36, edited 2 times in total.
Image
Menzo wrote:Lmao, you gotta love Zabe / SG...guy's so underrated.

StayWideAwake wrote:"Naturally handicapped, until proven intentionally retarded"
User avatar
SG.
The Watcher
The Watcher
 
Posts: 4794
Joined: Jul 21st, '11, 21:07
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez)

Postby SG. » Oct 11th, '11, 17:09

GT, did you read this one? viewtopic.php?f=24&t=128708

Because that's the best verse I've ever wrote in my opinion. Thanks for the feed.
Image
Menzo wrote:Lmao, you gotta love Zabe / SG...guy's so underrated.

StayWideAwake wrote:"Naturally handicapped, until proven intentionally retarded"
User avatar
SG.
The Watcher
The Watcher
 
Posts: 4794
Joined: Jul 21st, '11, 21:07
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez)

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 11th, '11, 17:15

GameTheory wrote:Feels like my orginization blew up. :wub:

That was a great drop guys, sleek flow and great lyrics lmao. I feel honored that TR Mad District made it into a song like this guys. Keep this shit flyin'.

JP stormed that shit, and Zabe stepped his game up WAY up since the last shit I read from him. You guys only go forward. :y:


LMAO I love this TR Mad District concept. I might run with this a bit later. OR... Trio makes a written track about it. :shifty:
Horsebot3K wrote:
Usernamesarehard wrote:My dick is going in your mouth whether you like it or not bipolar fuck boy.

Image
User avatar
JamaicanPattlez
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2656
Joined: Dec 26th, '10, 05:57
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez)

Postby SG. » Oct 11th, '11, 17:18

Geno wrote:My.
God.
I.
Don't.
Have.
Long.
Hair.

I was taking the piss out of everyone saying you have long hair. If I was being serious, I wouldn't have pointed it out awkwardly in the interlude.
Image
Menzo wrote:Lmao, you gotta love Zabe / SG...guy's so underrated.

StayWideAwake wrote:"Naturally handicapped, until proven intentionally retarded"
User avatar
SG.
The Watcher
The Watcher
 
Posts: 4794
Joined: Jul 21st, '11, 21:07
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez)

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 11th, '11, 17:27

Geno wrote:My.
God.
I.
Don't.
Have.
Long.
Hair.


:laughing:

GameTheory wrote:
JamaicanPattlez wrote:LMAO I love this TR Mad District concept. I might run with this a bit later. OR... Trio makes a written track about it. :shifty:


I'm up. :shifty:

@Zabe I'll check it out right now. :b:


Next drop, possibly? :shifty: and same!

@Geno LOL, I think I might use that in my style more from now on, it makes me laugh every time I see it. :laughing:
Horsebot3K wrote:
Usernamesarehard wrote:My dick is going in your mouth whether you like it or not bipolar fuck boy.

Image
User avatar
JamaicanPattlez
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2656
Joined: Dec 26th, '10, 05:57
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby Sam. » Oct 11th, '11, 19:46

Zabe

This is just a time pass freestyle so no need to go in any detailed feed.It's cool when members write about what's currently going on the forum.Nice use of the censor words oh ! wait Fuck is not censored.
Nice & Simple.


JamaicanPattlez

Look at this guy getting all serious and shit in this track. Naw it's all good. Nice shit there bruh ,I'm surprised how you manage to say things in such a simpler manner,that's actually a skill that very less writers posses.Don't get high with that praise, lol ! j/k again. No criticism.



Hey Geno !
viewtopic.php?f=21&t=69315&p=1436597#p1436597
:wub: :wub: :wub:
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
Image
Image
User avatar
Sam.
Bad Influence
Bad Influence
 
Posts: 16630
Joined: Jun 7th, '10, 11:10
Location: India
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 11th, '11, 19:58

Sam. wrote:Zabe

This is just a time pass freestyle so no need to go in any detailed feed.It's cool when members write about what's currently going on the forum.Nice use of the censor words oh ! wait Fuck is not censored.
Nice & Simple.


JamaicanPattlez

Look at this guy getting all serious and shit in this track. Naw it's all good. Nice shit there bruh ,I'm surprised how you manage to say things in such a simpler manner,that's actually a skill that very less writers posses.Don't get high with that praise, lol ! j/k again. No criticism.



Hey Geno !
viewtopic.php?f=21&t=69315&p=1436597#p1436597
:wub: :wub: :wub:


Lmao I guess it's because in the end, I like to get my point across in the most normal yet creative way possible. I've never been one for using outlandish words in rhymes haha, that's not me.
Horsebot3K wrote:
Usernamesarehard wrote:My dick is going in your mouth whether you like it or not bipolar fuck boy.

Image
User avatar
JamaicanPattlez
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2656
Joined: Dec 26th, '10, 05:57
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby SG. » Oct 11th, '11, 20:00

Time pass freestyle? :unsure:
Image
Menzo wrote:Lmao, you gotta love Zabe / SG...guy's so underrated.

StayWideAwake wrote:"Naturally handicapped, until proven intentionally retarded"
User avatar
SG.
The Watcher
The Watcher
 
Posts: 4794
Joined: Jul 21st, '11, 21:07
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby Sam. » Oct 11th, '11, 20:02

Geno wrote:Hell creepy tbh.

My hair's shorter than that though. :coffee:

You mad ? :shifty:
JamaicanPattlez wrote:
Sam. wrote:Zabe

This is just a time pass freestyle so no need to go in any detailed feed.It's cool when members write about what's currently going on the forum.Nice use of the censor words oh ! wait Fuck is not censored.
Nice & Simple.


JamaicanPattlez

Look at this guy getting all serious and shit in this track. Naw it's all good. Nice shit there bruh ,I'm surprised how you manage to say things in such a simpler manner,that's actually a skill that very less writers posses.Don't get high with that praise, lol ! j/k again. No criticism.



Hey Geno !
viewtopic.php?f=21&t=69315&p=1436597#p1436597
:wub: :wub: :wub:


Lmao I guess it's because in the end, I like to get my point across in the most normal yet creative way possible. I've never been one for using outlandish words in rhymes haha, that's not me.

That's why they call this the "Creative Writing" mate. :b:
Zabe wrote:Time pass freestyle? :unsure:

Throwaway verse... :coffee:
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
Image
Image
User avatar
Sam.
Bad Influence
Bad Influence
 
Posts: 16630
Joined: Jun 7th, '10, 11:10
Location: India
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby SG. » Oct 11th, '11, 20:04

...love the sentiment. :'(

Really though, you think this was a throwaway?
Image
Menzo wrote:Lmao, you gotta love Zabe / SG...guy's so underrated.

StayWideAwake wrote:"Naturally handicapped, until proven intentionally retarded"
User avatar
SG.
The Watcher
The Watcher
 
Posts: 4794
Joined: Jul 21st, '11, 21:07
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 11th, '11, 20:07

Ah, true, BUT... I'd have to be creative anyway. :8)
Horsebot3K wrote:
Usernamesarehard wrote:My dick is going in your mouth whether you like it or not bipolar fuck boy.

Image
User avatar
JamaicanPattlez
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2656
Joined: Dec 26th, '10, 05:57
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby Sam. » Oct 11th, '11, 20:08

Zabe wrote:...love the sentiment. :'(

Really though, you think this was a throwaway?

Why ? This is really weak as compared to other drops.
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
Image
Image
User avatar
Sam.
Bad Influence
Bad Influence
 
Posts: 16630
Joined: Jun 7th, '10, 11:10
Location: India
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby SG. » Oct 11th, '11, 20:09

Well, **** you too, you fucker. :D
Image
Menzo wrote:Lmao, you gotta love Zabe / SG...guy's so underrated.

StayWideAwake wrote:"Naturally handicapped, until proven intentionally retarded"
User avatar
SG.
The Watcher
The Watcher
 
Posts: 4794
Joined: Jul 21st, '11, 21:07
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 11th, '11, 20:14

Sam vs. Zabe! Buy tickets now at Ticketmaster, place bets now!!!


... :coffee:
Horsebot3K wrote:
Usernamesarehard wrote:My dick is going in your mouth whether you like it or not bipolar fuck boy.

Image
User avatar
JamaicanPattlez
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2656
Joined: Dec 26th, '10, 05:57
Gender: Male

Re: Mad Anthem (feat. JamaicanPattlez) [TRACK 7]

Postby SG. » Oct 11th, '11, 20:16

Always a disconnection,
Throwaway verse in the section,
Musta been Zabe,
Party-boying Sam to the wall in a rave.

:coffee:
Image
Menzo wrote:Lmao, you gotta love Zabe / SG...guy's so underrated.

StayWideAwake wrote:"Naturally handicapped, until proven intentionally retarded"
User avatar
SG.
The Watcher
The Watcher
 
Posts: 4794
Joined: Jul 21st, '11, 21:07
Location: Ireland
Gender: Male

Next

Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users