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help with hooks

Postby notherwise1234 » Oct 21st, '11, 16:03

I write verses but the hooks are pains in the @$$ any advice on making hooks?
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Re: help with hooks

Postby Sam. » Oct 21st, '11, 18:05

The hook should reflect what you are saying in the song,more like a summary.

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Re: help with hooks

Postby WakeUpShow » Oct 21st, '11, 19:29

i think a way to start getting the hang of hooks before you start experimenting with melody is to use internal rhyming because it gives it a rhythm and it's decently easy. here's an example:

Mystical Forces, out on a mission
Biblical Horsemen, bow to tradition
Sex and Seduction, make sure the pain hurts
Death and Destruction, all in a day's work


or have a central chant. Say a line followed by the chant. Another line, chant. so on and so forth
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