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No Other Way

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No Other Way

Postby Xray » Dec 25th, '11, 23:22

How many times must I die for this ending
Cause theyre breaking my mind till I'm different
Palms on my head and I'm cooling shit
So I'm armed to the death when I'm losing it
The worlds in a chained up poor mans hand
It's always in change and nobody gives a damn
They foreplay you with a riddle on the cam
Cause these bombs always land in the middle of the sand
These days no sleep without a tablet
These days the police always absent
These days in my plans there's a glitch like
These days there's a planet getting hitch hiked
These days you get thanked for that rich life
These days every prank make me sick like
And I'll break a button if you wanna skip heist
Cause I spit right in this fucking shit life

First verse to a new song I just finished recording. And fuck a feedback link, no one left feed for my other drop anyways. So give a fuck if you bitch about that.
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


New Track: The Nightmare
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Re: No Other Way

Postby Fleka » Dec 26th, '11, 00:33

I like it.
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Re: No Other Way

Postby Emadyville » Dec 26th, '11, 06:29

that goes hard, really liked it, flowed well too. good piece man :worship:
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Re: No Other Way

Postby fite_h8 » Jan 4th, '12, 06:57

I truly did like this peice. "These days" lines were definatly dope! Thing only thing i didnt like was your forced ryhming, but for forced words, it wasnt bad either. Nice piece.
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