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Postby KS_1 » Jan 23rd, '12, 15:32

Removed by Spyder

did not have link of feed, nor did he add it when asked

read CW rules please
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Re: Freeverse

Postby Just Silver » Jan 23rd, '12, 16:14

U need to post feedback from another persons piece first and place the link

Just so u know in the future, its good to see someone usin this section again its been dying
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Re: Freeverse

Postby KS_1 » Jan 23rd, '12, 16:23

Just Silver wrote:U need to post feedback from another persons piece first and place the link

Just so u know in the future, its good to see someone usin this section again its been dying


Ok cool man
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Re: Freeverse

Postby iain08 » Jan 23rd, '12, 22:58

Sounded incredibly basic and like 95% of the writtens on this site. All the multis are forced as hell and all you're saying is the same shit everybody else says when they aren't creative enough to actually write something.

And don't give that bullshit excuse of this being bad because it's over a year old. If you've actually improved in writing (hope so) then fucking post it instead of making up an excuse of why this piece sucks so much dick.
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Re: Freeverse

Postby Just Silver » Jan 24th, '12, 01:36

U need to practice try posting in the Multi Cypher section and mess around with the multis skill you have now and improve also by writing down stuff and saving the draft
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Re: Freeverse

Postby Spyder » Jan 24th, '12, 01:37

1.post a link of feed or this will be deleted

2.ion, why u just post to hate on dudes, give em constructive feedback on how they can improve
or dont post here at all.
idc if u dont like it or make it known, just let him and others what they can do to improve. you hate but ive never seen u write anything...

just pull out that tampon brah
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Re: Freeverse

Postby iain08 » Jan 24th, '12, 02:26

Spyder wrote:2.ion, why u just post to hate on dudes, give em constructive feedback on how they can improve
or dont post here at all.
idc if u dont like it or make it known, just let him and others what they can do to improve. you hate but ive never seen u write anything...

just pull out that tampon brah

1. I don't know how you butchered my name that badly. I'd rather give my honest opinion, and my post wasn't just saying "you suck." I said his multis were forced and the content was very generic. And because I don't post writtens here doesn't mean I can't judge.
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Re: Freeverse

Postby Spyder » Jan 24th, '12, 17:18

1.dont really pay attention to your name.
2. ok
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Re: Freeverse

Postby Enimee » Jan 25th, '12, 07:40

:worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Freeverse

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 25th, '12, 10:07

Lmao, Kez??

wtf are you doing? you lost your password?
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Re: Freeverse

Postby KS_1 » Jan 25th, '12, 14:52

No I'm a different user, apparently I have the same IP address as the other Kez but I am not him/her. I don't know how that works out but I wanted to change my username after I found out there was another guy with pretty much same name to avoid confusion between other members
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Re: Freeverse

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 25th, '12, 15:09

K.E.Z. wrote:No I'm a different user, apparently I have the same IP address as the other Kez but I am not him/her. I don't know how that works out but I wanted to change my username after I found out there was another guy with pretty much same name to avoid confusion between other members


hahaha well that's pretti interesting, I know the other kez doesnt have an alternate accout lol, but yeah, your IP's n location match haha, you are from England right?

it won't be a confusion cuz of the name color and personality, so don't worry about that :y:
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Re: Freeverse

Postby KS_1 » Jan 26th, '12, 20:19

B.A.D. wrote:
K.E.Z. wrote:No I'm a different user, apparently I have the same IP address as the other Kez but I am not him/her. I don't know how that works out but I wanted to change my username after I found out there was another guy with pretty much same name to avoid confusion between other members


hahaha well that's pretti interesting, I know the other kez doesnt have an alternate accout lol, but yeah, your IP's n location match haha, you are from England right?

it won't be a confusion cuz of the name color and personality, so don't worry about that :y:


No I am not from England. I am from Northern Ireland
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