Still Keepin' It Raw

[Mr.DGAF]

I always loved the rhyme scheme of Em's freestyle here. You do a god job continuing it, and then going into your own place. It's obvious you took some inspiration from this, and you honestly did it justice. There were some lines that were really well put together. Like:

Intelligence level that is peaking the top
Of Mount Everest, seeing it from
The perspective of young midgets, 3 ft from the ground
Back leaning to watch and wreaking in awe

I really liked how you maintained parts of the original rhyme scheme through it all, then branched off to your own scheme. It was nice, the flow was on point, lyrics were great as always.

[Atone]

i used to do this when i was 13 and just started writing, i had a notebook with my own versions of every eminem song from Slim Shady LP to Eminem Show, thank god i stasrted writin my own shit tho lol

but this is good, hard to really get into it without imagining eminem's voice sayin it tho, but still good

Really teachin' you the meaning of suck

lol, this line just sounds gay, jus sayin

should of ended it here
You appear to be mad do you see things that’ll touch

cuz after this line it sort of just dragged on and got boring

but like i said, this was pretty nice

[Man1x]

Dude! this was amazing, the only complaint is that I wouldn't reuse old styles and make something yourself. I understand that you usually don't so this isn't a problem. You didn't do the freestyle any wrong. Feed me back?

http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=142962

[Emadyville]

it's hard to read something 'new' but following the same schemes and sorta the same rhymes as ems, but i did enjoy this even tho i couldnt get the flow right away. the rhymes were cool, and it was good you put the 2 warnings first cause you'd of had everyone on here bitchin haha good drop homie.

so are you recording this?

[Emadyville]

well get on it, i still never heard u rhyme

[Emadyville]

fuck, i was hoping you wouldn't ask!


cuz i have no clue

[Emadyville]

O...so it all comes back to lloyd braun doesnt it!

[Emadyville]

and the woman on the horse haha