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Re: Ego ft. D. Dubs - Blood, Sweat & Tears

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 25th, '12, 12:34

I'd like to see this recorded for sure

Alieus is Menzo right??

awsome verses
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Re: Ego ft. D. Dubs - Blood, Sweat & Tears

Postby Robbie G » Jan 25th, '12, 21:04

I thought they were all pretty good. :y:

From what I could tell Emady had the best flow, I thought the first two were a little off.
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Re: Ego ft. D. Dubs - Blood, Sweat & Tears

Postby Emadyville » Jan 26th, '12, 13:03

thanks for the feed guys
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Ego ft. D. Dubs - Blood, Sweat & Tears

Postby Man1x » Jan 27th, '12, 20:23

Everyone was really good, I felt D. Dubs's verse the most however. Geno, you would have been 1st if your complex flow was easy for me to connect with, but i got it after some re-reading. Menzo your a close third behind the other two but it's an EXTREMELY close third so don't think that I thought it was bad. I'm always impressed by the vocabulary that you are able to pull from your head. Imagery was amazing from everyone. My favorite line from the whole thing, even though it wasn't from my favorite verse: "I'd rather take this and place the gun to my ear/But with my luck it's a miracle if I bust my cerebral/"

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Re: Ego ft. D. Dubs - Blood, Sweat & Tears

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jan 30th, '12, 23:22

This is awesome guys, no really surprise there though.

Geno, I liked your verse best. The rhyme scheme was awesome, easily the main reason why I enjoy your verse the most. It makes it hypnotic, really hard not to vibe to. The flow was pretty much on point, but it wasn't perfect.

Alieus, a quality verse as always. Ego really brings the heat. The rhyming was kind of off at times, but it was still a good verse. It honestly contained probably the most passion out of the verses that I read. Which helps compensate for something everybody here knows you can do on any track: rhyme your ass off. It's nice to see that kind of take a back seat a bit.

D.Dubs had that flow man. It was rhyme after rhyme in such a smooth way dude, it flowed beautifully. Nothing really to critique about your verse. It's a little short, I guess haha. But, yeah, good shit dude.
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Re: Ego ft. D. Dubs - Blood, Sweat & Tears

Postby Emadyville » Jan 30th, '12, 23:32

thanks bro
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Ego ft. D. Dubs - Blood, Sweat & Tears

Postby SajN » Jan 30th, '12, 23:35

Oh god, this is wack.


I almost puked man
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Re: Ego ft. D. Dubs - Blood, Sweat & Tears

Postby Emadyville » Jan 30th, '12, 23:39

such a smartass you are haha
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Ego ft. D. Dubs - Blood, Sweat & Tears

Postby Emadyville » Jan 30th, '12, 23:42

Menzo wrote:What an intellectually superior gluteus.


gay, son
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Re: Ego ft. D. Dubs - Blood, Sweat & Tears

Postby Emadyville » Jan 31st, '12, 23:15

Geno wrote:Mentally mole from Emadymole.


:laughing:

wtf's that even mean :laughing:
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Re: Ego ft. D. Dubs - Blood, Sweat & Tears

Postby Emadyville » Feb 1st, '12, 04:53

Menzo wrote:YadamolewhatImean?


:laughing:


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