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A Taste.

Postby Nobody Special » Feb 15th, '12, 17:49

i didnt put up a link of feed so Spyder raped me
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Re: A Taste.

Postby mdemaz » Feb 16th, '12, 12:28

Nice metaphors and such in this piece dude, and yeah, you need a feed link bro.
Hoping to see you become a valid and relevant member.
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Re: A Taste.

Postby Spyder » Feb 17th, '12, 18:35

please read the CW rules and feed someone elses piece as Geno said,
post the link on here to let us know youve contributed.

if you dont within the next time of reading this i will have to delete it and just give u a pm warning
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Re: A Taste.

Postby Wallace » Feb 19th, '12, 00:47

The biggest flaw is the flow. Everything else is ok.
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