Love Song (Track 6)

[Mr.DGAF]

Something I wrote up real quick, it's kind of a sappy love song. And the chorus goes along with the exact piano beat, it's kind of hard to pick up, so yeah. Enjoy.

Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=144677
Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-LXqKEGjpB0&feature=related

[Verse 1]
I walked out of the club with this thing clinging to my wrist
Begging me take it home, then it leaned in for the kiss
I would seemingly resist cause I don't want a relationship
It kept playing with my dick but man we hadn't even dated yet
But still I'd hate to have to walk away by myself
I hadn't been laid in forever, I was craving it's help
Too late to bail, I hopped in the whip and we started to dip
Halfway home it got on my dick, then it throttled that shit
Got to the crib, had a session, what a blessing in disguise
The sex was better than alright, I'll never let it leave my side
We could mess around all night, man I'm lucky to have found
Such a wonderful, profound love that never shuts me down
I could never put you down, always hanging on my arm
You're an angel, you're a star, if I'm pain then you're the scar
Man you're great, you know you are, never fucking other men
So my trust in you still stands, damn I love my fucking hand

[Chorus]
I love you, and I need you, I want do you no harm
You're on my arm, trust that
I love you, and I need you, I am always your man
I love my hand, I love my hand

[Verse 2]
Getting jealous over nothing, claiming you were hurt and left me
Cause you peeked over one night and then you saw me jerking leftie
Sure you said we'd never break up, and I'm awfully thankful
So I robbed a bank to get the cash and bought you a bracelet
Then you stopped being grateful, in a minute you changed
You stopped making me snacks, stopped playing video games
I was wishing you'd stay, but then you left without a note
Full of doubt without a hope, that's when I found I'd had a stroke
My right side had gone numb, and our love was lost forever
I would never recover, I couldn't ever get better
I was fed up with my life, so I went to make a noose
Couldn't tell what's fake or true so I had to face the truth
See my other hand was functional, and since you left I've fucked it too
It's crazy cause I loved you boo, now I don't know what to do
I turned to the other you, another one who'd step in
I used to want my right one, but now I love my left hand

[Chorus]
I love you, and I need you, I want do you no harm
You're on my arm, trust that
I love you, and I need you, I am always your man
I love my hand, I love my hand

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

HAHAHA this was great man!! very creative! nice drop!!

[Mr.DGAF]

Hahaha, thanks a lot guys. 'Preciate the kind words!

[Cupid Stunt]

Good job d00d! lol.

[Blu]

Lololol, nice. Didn't expect that. The second I saw "Love Song" I was like "whaaat?" Luckily my thinking was wrong.

Good drop my man. :beer:

[RainMan44]

LMFAOOOOOOOO... omg, this shit is brilliant. It's actually funny... yo, please record this shit on this exact beat...I think it'll be funny as FUCK.

I wasn't expecting it, then when I read the 'love my hand' line I chuckled.

Also, I picked up on the melody of the chorus after a couple tries


This shit was well written, too. Clever as hell. Multies were nice, wit was there, flow was there. The beat was also nice, it actually adds to the humor. It's all serious and emotional and shit, and here you are rapping about your hand.


"Getting jealous over nothing, claiming you were hurt and left me
Cause you peeked over one night and then you saw me jerking leftie"

I liked that part. Lol, nice shit man. Haven't read a piece that's made me laugh in a while, keep at it.


Mind feeding mine? viewtopic.php?f=24&t=144899

[Mr.DGAF]

Haha thanks guys, mucho gracias.