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Re: Stress Relief

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » May 1st, '12, 01:33

Damn! Awesome piece man! Great Multis, Great inner rhyming, and awesome flow. Thanks for posting, I enjoyed reading tthis one a lot dude!! Keep it up!
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Re: Stress Relief

Postby Emadyville » May 1st, '12, 01:37

Actually, easily the best from you I've ever read. The flow (i didnt even listen to the beat) was dope, the rhymes and multis and everything with rhyming in this was top notch. I loved the content, made me laugh, made me feel your words, def dope. I loved the first verse and put that above the second, but the second was def still dope. Loved the multis that started the first verse too, not only was it creative story telling, but that multi and how you worked it was sick bro
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Re: Stress Relief

Postby Emadyville » May 1st, '12, 01:45

Geno wrote:Damn, the best? Thanks a lot. Glad you were feeling it so much. I'm feeling this style a lot lately, and to hear you guys enjoy it so quickly after I dropped it is encouraging. I'll definitely continue this style for the time being.


I mean, beyond the rhyming which you know how much i love multis, shit like this:

you're like a fourth of a slow start

is not only funny, is part of a multi, but mostly is creative (and in that, thought provoking, cause you had to think about it a second before you 'got it' got it you know). when its all 3 thats what makes it so dope. you can have great multis and be funny but without being creative its just good, never great. being creative can be genius, but usually without multis and/or being funny its just good, not great. you brought all 3 man, which is why it was great
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Re: Stress Relief

Postby Emadyville » May 1st, '12, 01:56

Geno wrote:I love when you feed because you expand on everything and sincerely mean what you say instead of some guys just posting "This was dope!", because even if they liked it, they're not really telling me what they liked. And you do. So thanks!


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Re: Stress Relief

Postby mdemaz » May 1st, '12, 03:31

Good read man, not much to say, I enjoyed it.
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Re: Stress Relief

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 1st, '12, 04:13

Yeah man, not much else to say. The topic was nice haha, you had me at the first line. I actually thought you were just gonna keep that same scheme going the entire first verse. The flows nice as always, but the rhymes are so smooth. It's like you just said "fuck it, I'ma write some shit" and it just happened to rhyme perfectly. Whether the concent is your best or not is debatable, but that first verse was one of the best things I've seen you write. The way the rhymes come out so flawlessly, that was pretty nice.
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