AhdduB - If I Had Remix

[Ticalrecords]

so my producer is gonna use the same drum pattern as Eminem's If I Had, so i decided to do a cover of his song. i've only written it out so far... tell me what you think of it. btw this may be put on the radio idk yet, its gonna be professionally produced and what not.


heres my link to feedback

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Life, by Nikil Kukkala
What is life? Life is like an inside joke between a so called god and devil. And every time you think you understand how it works, theres always an exception to the rule…
What are friends? Most friends want something from you, they think you can give it to them that’s why they choose to deal with you in the first place. A real friend tells it to you straight, even if its something you don’t want to hear.
What is money? Money lets a person see the funny side of life. a wealthy pessimist is an oxymoron, they don’t exist. But get this – money will turn your best friend into a fucking yes man. And theres nothing you can do about it… what is life... I’m fed up with life


Im telling ya I’m Fed Up with living in fear of writers block,
And I’m even more Fed up with wishing that I could rewind the clock,
with a bunch of crumpled up verses piling up in my trashcan
too abstract – with all these reference to acid flash backs
fed up with using lunch money on college library printers
fed up with handing out fliers while everyone else is at dinner
fed up with being a running joke at the fucking university
fed up with saying when I make it I swear you’ll be the first to see/
fed up with seeing my fingerprints smearing the paper dark,
not being able to read my own lyrics from all the eraser marks,
fed up with flubbing a line after practicing on days end,
cuz I wrote it high and I cant remember how I was supposed to say it,
fed up with the amount of fuck loyal fans give to rappers,
fed up with wanting the world handed to me on a silver platter,
fuck it im fed up with time constraints that I can’t avoid,
fed up with rapping in my mind with my favorite rapper’s voice, /

(a girl is gon sing this hook)
never before - have i felt so sure
my demons staged a meet and greet and death's door
please help me lord - don't leave me all alone
its so cold - so cold out here all alone


I’m mostly fed up with posting my songs on facebook
it takes 3 minutes to listen to a song that took two days to
write and memorize – fed up with thinking I spent the time
at least give it one listen – really tell me what missing?
I done did it – fed up with critique summed up in one sentence
I want paragraphs – pages – on why I’m not famous
My music is interesting - is it not?
Can ya bop – ya head and stomp – to it like brainless pop – yes I think ya got/
to admit – yes I fit – whatever bill I gotta pay to be the shit
meaning its – gotta happen really fucking quick
cuz I can’t take it any longer – I’m bugged out
they says you can’t push a rope – and I’m strung out
by all counts - I’m out on a prosthetic limb here
fed up with feeling detached – ha yet sincere
grin sneer – laugh aloud – cuz I’m fed up with having crowds
staring blank faced at me when they should be cracking smiles/


bridge:
if I had one album – it be the MMLP
if I had one car – it be the newest M3
if I had one house – it be out in new york
if I had one show – it be the up in smoke tour
if I had one goal in life – it be to find it
if I had one demon – it be my shyness
if I had one bro – it be LP and he knows that
and if I had one girl – HA it be Lindsay Lohan

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Good job man, I liked the piece. you had some pretty good multis in there too! way to go man nice piece keep it up.