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Apocolypse (Track 10)

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Apocolypse (Track 10)

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 5th, '12, 19:59

Haven't released anything under the set of writtens ep thingy I started a while back, so here's the next one. If I ever record, this is the one I was thinking of recording. FYI the beat drops kinda quickly haha, it may catch you off guard.

Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=144997
Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aDKln4jLqiY



(Verse 1)
My world's already over so I'm taking yours with me
You fucked me over once and hoped that I was forgiving
Now I'm morbidly addicted to pillaging your city
Then move to the next because I get bored quickly
Like it was a tour, really I wanna extract revenge
You left me by myself a year ago, I'm back again
Our paths have crossed, now your past is all you're acting with
Trying to tap into the time when we were actually friends
Yeah I was mad but I guess the past has passed us then
But what happens if I told you that your acts of sin
I can't allow that, hence that's why I'm at your crib
Strapped with clips, the hand of God has come to snatch your kin
Take 'em to heaven, keep you on earth while I ravage it
Now pause a bit, and think about the cause of this awkardness
You never called, so I'm here to warn you about your apocolypse

(Chorus)
Once a friend, now an enemy of everything I am
I gave you anything you wanted, now I've come to get it back
So it's time to quit the act, I'm filling in for God to give
The ones who fucked me over their proper apocolypse

(Verse 2)
Bring you to my hell, the same place that you made for me
You played with me and now I can't stray from thinking crazy things
Like maybe if you hadn't been so jaded we'd have made a team
But you're faded memory has clouded what you failed to see
Now there's so many maybes, I could maybe build a maybe tree
Then put you on the top, now maybe that's the way to save my dreams
To keep you from creating scenes of happiness to draw me back
It worked a couple times, I'd fall for that, but no more crawling back
I'm stalling, yeah, I guess it's time to tell you that your world is changing
Now you feel the earth is shaking, all because you hurt me angel
Hope that it was worth the pain you caused me but it probably isn't
You gotta be popping pills to think that I would stop my mission
To find you, my opposition, kill you and accomplish this wish
So follow my talks of vengance, no longer are you my mistress
Don't bother to try and wish that I would stop, the optimism
Has been lost in this apocolypse that God is giving

(Chorus)
Once a friend, now an enemy of everything I am
I gave you anything you wanted, now I've come to get it back
So it's time to quit the act, I'm filling in for God to give
The ones who fucked me over their proper apocolypse
Last edited by Mr.DGAF on Aug 2nd, '12, 05:59, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: Apocolypse (Track 8)

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » May 5th, '12, 20:05

Damn man everything you drop is hot, awesome multis and great use of vocabulary, really liked the topic, great piece dude I'll definitely be looking out for your next drop!!
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Re: Apocolypse (Track 8)

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 7th, '12, 22:56

Thanks homie! Appreciate it, I really liked this beat so I felt like I needed to drop something on it.
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Re: Apocolypse (Track 8)

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 8th, '12, 01:46

Sweet, I actually do have an idea and a beat ready. I'll hit you up in a minute. :y:
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Re: Apocolypse (Track 8)

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 8th, '12, 11:52

Haha, maybe, this might be directed at someone. Maybe. But yeah, it's weird because I actually just started getting in to Hopsin, so if it does sound like his stuff, that's really cool haha.
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