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Geno ft. Hesky - This Chair

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Re: Geno ft. Hesky - This Chair

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 7th, '12, 22:50

Haha, this was weird, but I actually liked the topic. I was surprised but I'm really tempted to say Hesky came better on this one. Both of you had great imagery, that was easily the standout part of the track. But Geno's rhymes, for some reason, seemed kind of off. I can't really explain, it's like I was reading it, and it just didn't flow as smoothly as every other piece I've seen you drop. Not to say it was bad or anything like that, but something wasn't quite up to par with some of the stuff I've seen from you before. But hey, maybe it's just my personal taste. The hook was cool, both of you flowed pretty well on the beat. Took me a couple listens, but I'm pretty sure I got it. But yeah, good stuff from both of you guys, the concept was out there, but definitely cool. :y:
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Re: Geno ft. Hesky - This Chair

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 7th, '12, 23:19

Haha, the elusive legend that is Geno. Yeah, that's what I thought, it was cool to see you fuck around, the content reminded me a lot of this movie "Rubber".
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Re: Geno ft. Hesky - This Chair

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 7th, '12, 23:43

Haha, cheesy movies are the greatest. :y: So since I'm relatively new, or at least new enough to not know, did you used to drop in the CW or anything? I can't quite recall.
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Re: Geno ft. Hesky - This Chair

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 8th, '12, 00:16

Wow, that was really fucking good stuff. Your entry in the writing competition was ridiculous, that was some nice stuff. I'm officially convinced man, I wanna try and collab with ya. If you don't want to, that's cool haha, I'd get it.

Maybe check my latest piece, "Apocolypse", and see if it would be something you're interested in. If not, it was worth the try. :y:
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Re: Geno ft. Hesky - This Chair

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 8th, '12, 11:50

Hahahaha, the way the topic is described is awesome. I may have to give the generator a look, that could kind of help the CW honestly.
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Re: Geno ft. Hesky - This Chair

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » May 9th, '12, 14:28

I liked this a lot guys! both went hard, I couldnt choose a favorite verse. Great multis, It makes it even better knowing that yall got the idea from the Creative Writing Generator hahahahah too great! Nice job, keep up the good work!
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