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Picture My Words (Track 3)

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Re: Picture My Words

Postby Eedee » May 23rd, '12, 10:10

Everyone else pretty much summed up what this piece is. Beauty.

My favorite part:

Of appreciating music, differentiating tunes with ears of magic
Special tools that I would use to hear my passion


I don't know, something about "ears of magic / hear my passion" was a great rhyme. Made me all fuzzy inside haha.

Good shit, nice drop! :y:
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Re: Picture My Words

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 24th, '12, 03:47

Haha thanks homie!
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How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Picture My Words

Postby Eedee » May 24th, '12, 04:05

Oh shit. Just read this again and my commented rhyme was even bigger.

"... tunes with ears of magic / use to hear my passion... " Damn.
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Re: Picture My Words

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 24th, '12, 12:41

Thanks man! I was actually wondering when I posted it if I would get any TL;DR's haha.


InsaneTRex94 wrote:When Menzo finishes up with that Passin' Me By shit, I'll get that up. I've been really uninspired recently, trying to do that other track we were doing, I'll try to get on with that...still gotta do shit for Geno and ShAdYTiLIDie too...Sorry for all the holdups and shit, I haven't written in a while...hopefully I don't have another writer's block.


Cool man, hopefully you don't run into writer's block. That can be a bitch. And it's cool, take ya time breh, I'm always down for the collab when you've got the time. :y:
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