Eedee - Let's Show Off

[Eedee]

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=145453
Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=isT_DvJ_ ... re=related

* Verse starts right after the tag on the beat around :11-ish... Something I wrote just now to keep the creative juices flowing for this long summer. Hope you guys enjoy! Oh yeah... there's no concept or anything. Just random shit.

Thick skin like a Beatle, come here and let me hold ya hand,
so I leverage you to crush you down hard like soda cans.
You 'tard, this moment's bad enough without you screamin',
Plus now you're bleeding, fuckin' around, we're leaving.
I'll pound your seat in as long as you're still seated,
Kill heathens with power flows like the bombs are worth depleting.
I then hear "Earth to Eedee, the moms will burn your CDs",
Look at my stern face and see it's hard to hurt me, queasy
Is now what you've become from exercising your right,
To fuckin' sleep on my shit before, but now I'm buying my time.
Like "Hi, I'm a crime", my rhymes are criminal as fuck,
Who needs fuckin' empathy? I'm pitiful as whaaa?
I can be as smooth or as choppy as Chopin,
Who has seen the ending? When I stop it you'll know when.
Don't copy my flow then - sell it off as your own,
I'll body your ho, oh shit, man, I'm awfully zoned.

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

Great verse, You've been putting out a lot of great pieces lately and in a short amount of time which is awesome! The inverse that Menzo noted above is awesome, Idk what it is about inverses but they just seem a lot more complex and hard to do and make it work than the regular multis. Also, your vocabulary is great. I didnt know what a lot of the words meant but too lazy to look them up lol! I need to expand.
Any ways, Great verse keep them coming!

[Eedee]

@ Menzo - Thanks for the looks! Yes, that inverse was intentional. There was another inverse in there, I know it's hard to see but

"I can be as smooth or as choppy as Chopin,
Who has seen the ending? When I stop it you'll know when."

"Be as smooth / who has seen" = "Be as smooth / seen has who"

@ Shady - Hey man, thanks as well! I appreciate the time you took to read it. I'll definitely drop more.