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Sometimes I Wish...

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Postby Le Tunisien » May 30th, '12, 07:11

i live your style of writing..kept the rhyming and content going well you should record this , keep it up
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Postby JamaicanPattlez » May 30th, '12, 07:16

Le Tunisien wrote:i live your style of writing..kept the rhyming and content going well you should record this , keep it up


Haha, thank you so much. Maybe I will, honestly! Who knows. :happy:

Geno wrote:Have you ever dropped a 3 verse solo song? Just wondering.


No I haven't. I don't really think about dropping here when I write, like when I write something I usually write to get what I'm thinking off my chest, and then I post it on my facebook or store it somewhere for me to use later in some way. Sometimes, out of those verses I write, I post them here. :y:
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Postby recollectg4 » Jun 8th, '12, 09:44

That is a very moving song/poem. Have you sang this song to music? Is this a rap song or just a regular song? This song is amazing. You write very well and this song/poem says a lot about you and the way a lot of people feel today. Thank you for sharing this song/poem. :y: :wave:
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