Drafts you will never finish

[Just Silver]

Ive seen some old drafts i have here from last year i probably will never finish so i thought if any of you have some old drafts or lines that would like to be seen just post them here

first example :"a body that dont budge a mouth that wont move
A robotic psychotic motherfucker on the loose
And even if in a good mood and introduced
He'll still lose his cool like soup in June"

lol dont know where that was going

[Sam.]

I've about dozens of them, my friend. Just a sparkle of ideas propels me to write on that topic, half way or after reaching a point, another idea strikes me, and I move on to that. Fucking..

Here's some, it's basically a freestyle, lol.

My boldest line is when i rub my dick behind ,
your back girl and move it slowly down your spine,
till i hit the spot right ,which is god damn fine,
to me because i got all the time ,
of the world ,butt the way your ass shines,
on my dick making it bright and there's no sin,
in holding it in tight

I might finish some day in the next decade.

[Just Silver]

I've about dozens of them, my friend. Just a sparkle of ideas propels me to write on that topic, half way or after reaching a point, another idea strikes me, and I move on to that. Fucking..

Here's some, it's basically a freestyle, lol.

My boldest line is when i rub my dick behind ,
your back girl and move it slowly down your spine,
till i hit the spot right ,which is god damn fine,
to me because i got all the time ,
of the world ,butt the way your ass shines,
on my dick making it bright and there's no sin,
in holding it in tight

I might finish some day in the next decade.

lol all i could picture was a porno

[Just Silver]

hers another dubbed "radio clock"

"Im settin' my radio clock straight on the dot
Facing the clock ready or not
Trying to top the verses I thought often a lot
Money wasn't offered for spots so I entered my drop
Knowing that I probably wouldn't pop
Only God knew or not If i had just some talk
Or some chalk i would outline in mind or jot
Even when rhymes have stopped to a level I knock
I embedded the plot in my own little box
I might use it now and later a lil sour debater
Much more than your average savior"

[Mr.DGAF]

Yeah man, there's one in particular I always kept going back to but never finished. Still haven't released it, probably never will.

[Just Silver]

Yeah man, there's one in particular I always kept going back to but never finished. Still haven't released it, probably never will.

post watchya got guy thats the point of the thread lol

[Mr.DGAF]

Ahh, aight. Here's something I wrote when I just started writing, had the entire verse and chorus done but never got the other verse, and I dropped it.


I put a lot of might into this, I gotta write the truest
I gotta spit some fire, so hot it takes me higher
I spot my name on flyers, I hope that they can see this
If not I may expire, they think that I’m the weakest
The memories will creep in, the girl I used to sleep with
It hurts so bad to think of, the first ho that I g’d up,
She said I had potential, her loving was my freedom
We'd fuck and then she'd leave but our love was confidential
I thought I had credentials, she cheated every inch though
It seemed inconsequential; how could I find her out?
Wasn't hard, I'd find his house and in an instant fights broke out
Then I close my eyes and PLOW, you’re gone and I forget
Now I’m filled with this regret, still remember how I wept
And December was a mess, man for real I can’t accept
How you did me, shit, I'm wishing you did it to someone else
Been through hell and five years, when I get to see you next
You will get to see me rich, and then I’ll need some respect


We expect to get it
Need respect? Forget it
You didn’t pay your price
So accept this sentence
You’ll go away for life
Sent to die in the trenches
So much for staying, right?
No respect for these bitches!

[Just Silver]

Ahh, aight. Here's something I wrote when I just started writing, had the entire verse and chorus done but never got the other verse, and I dropped it.


I put a lot of might into this, I gotta write the truest
I gotta spit some fire, so hot it takes me higher
I spot my name on flyers, I hope that they can see this
If not I may expire, they think that I’m the weakest
The memories will creep in, the girl I used to sleep with
It hurts so bad to think of, the first ho that I g’d up,
She said I had potential, her loving was my freedom
We'd fuck and then she'd leave but our love was confidential
I thought I had credentials, she cheated every inch though
It seemed inconsequential; how could I find her out?
Wasn't hard, I'd find his house and in an instant fights broke out
Then I close my eyes and PLOW, you’re gone and I forget
Now I’m filled with this regret, still remember how I wept
And December was a mess, man for real I can’t accept
How you did me, shit, I'm wishing you did it to someone else
Been through hell and five years, when I get to see you next
You will get to see me rich, and then I’ll need some respect


We expect to get it
Need respect? Forget it
You didn’t pay your price
So accept this sentence
You’ll go away for life
Sent to die in the trenches
So much for staying, right?
No respect for these bitches!

pretty good too bad it got trashed

[Just Silver]

Supposed to be a collab with DerdyPk lol old as hell

SInce you have not been applying the pressure
Im supplying for mecca in this sector
Get high and hike against it im gettin hypertension
I flick my lighter lit and,Im the sickest flyest fig-mant
Pigs can fly? im like shit man, this bud is done in instant
Time combined just how i am blind, why everythings a trick plan
Say action spray click-clack away, ready for play action neigh..
Im Madd-en happy like "there he goes boom"
I think it goes through,these head are thick i told you
I mold dudes, like sold food i make them my old "dues"
Hell no he didn't Hell yes he did
Hell no flipped two little letters and spun "ON" to this shit
So bruised little feathers of my cruel true endeavors
Can fly fly into a mist, get high just for a bit
They fly wont heaven forbid?

[Mr.DGAF]

^Haha, the first lines reminded me of Relapse. Here's something I wrote more recently, maybe three or four months ago. A lot of the shit I don't release is directed at the same girl. Oh well haha.

I fucking handed you my heart, but you just cut it in half
The trust that I had, is gone, you just crushed it and laughed
It sucks but I'm glad, to never have to see you again
Cause when I see you with him, it makes me so fucking sad
I guess I know what we had, it was over before it started
We are broken, you've departed, and it showed that you were heartless



EDIT: Here's something else that goes along with this piece I found floating around. Was trying a different rhyme scheme here, something like:

A B

C B

B A

C A

But it never really panned out. Still about the same chick haha.

My feet are stuck in quick sand, I try to pull them out
Cause I see you are approaching, man I'd die to fool around
Sure you might not choose me now, see I just won't quit man
I need you but ya don't see how my mind has something big planned

[Just Silver]

^Haha, the first lines reminded me of Relapse. Here's something I wrote more recently, maybe three or four months ago. A lot of the shit I don't release is directed at the same girl. Oh well haha.

I fucking handed you my heart, but you just cut it in half
The trust that I had, is gone, you just crushed it and laughed
It sucks but I'm glad, to never have to see you again
Cause when I see you with him, it makes me so fucking sad
I guess I know what we had, it was over before it started
We are broken, you've departed, and it showed that you were heartless



EDIT: Here's something else that goes along with this piece I found floating around. Was trying a different rhyme scheme here, something like:

A B

C B

B A

C A

But it never really panned out. Still about the same chick haha.

My feet are stuck in quick sand, I try to pull them out
Cause I see you are approaching, man I'd die to fool around
Sure you might not choose me now, see I just won't quit man
I need you but ya don't see how my mind has something big planned

I never got into a complicated rhyme scheme until i started listening to "New Hiphop"
but what you got there is actually real nice flow

[Just Silver]

I found one Menzo and I were doing before but never finished because we got bored of the concept. It might have been the rough draft to Lost & Found but I'm not sure. Maybe a song coming after it. The concept was something like Menzo telling me to stop dating a girl and break up with her via text, and then we'd kill her. I don't even know if that's right. That's why we scrapped it, 'cause it was stupid as fuck lol.

But I like my flow on this part

That's morbid, cut her into pieces, eat her feet
With the meat cleaver greased with the blood of the whore's tits,
Easy enough, are you bored yet?...Put her in a box in assortment,
Shut it down, lock it and close it, and send it out to orbit,
Watch it explode an' wave bye-bye! Now you oughta be close to Kate, my guy,
The problem is gone, she'll be in space by 5,

reminds me of Guilty Conscience

[Sam.]

I've about dozens of them, my friend. Just a sparkle of ideas propels me to write on that topic, half way or after reaching a point, another idea strikes me, and I move on to that. Fucking..

Here's some, it's basically a freestyle, lol.

My boldest line is when i rub my dick behind ,
your back girl and move it slowly down your spine,
till i hit the spot right ,which is god damn fine,
to me because i got all the time ,
of the world ,butt the way your ass shines,
on my dick making it bright and there's no sin,
in holding it in tight

I might finish some day in the next decade.

lol all i could picture was a porno

It is, lmao.
There are some that I ghost wrote for Spyder, yes, Spyder. I pm'd him those, he just never posted them. Fucking bastard.

[Just Silver]

Found another one, which really isn't that bad but it is really unoriginal. I wrote this one to practice on the mic, never intended on releasing this:

Spittin' this venom, my mission is endless,
A carniferous yen when I'm grippin' the pen, bitch,
A merciless vengeance, your nerves to be messed with,
The words of my diction to hurt with intention,
The earth is in wreckage, purgin' in seconds,
Urkin' to sever the world with a sentence,
It's absurd to conjecture the verse is the endin',
only a third of the session, there's worse to endeavor.

i liked it lol

[Just Silver]

This ones called Pepsi-One lol

I get these guns sniffing coke drinkin pepsi one
who had left this rum is gonna be bummed
Cause I took that mixed everything at once
backwash lumps and becomes solid
fuck the promise i come up and struck the longest
flawless of synagogue-ish moshing of words and off to serve
im positive no offs to church i can keep a word
I can keep a line and beat and the rhyme in me occurs
not violently you might just reach my peak and and live