Drafts you will never finish

[J.R.]

When I was on some "I'm better than you " shit

This is the catastrophe of rapping see?
Looking like an ass when I smash emcees

[Eedee]

Ahh, aight. Here's something I wrote when I just started writing, had the entire verse and chorus done but never got the other verse, and I dropped it.


I put a lot of might into this, I gotta write the truest
I gotta spit some fire, so hot it takes me higher
I spot my name on flyers, I hope that they can see this
If not I may expire, they think that I’m the weakest
The memories will creep in, the girl I used to sleep with
It hurts so bad to think of, the first ho that I g’d up,
She said I had potential, her loving was my freedom
We'd fuck and then she'd leave but our love was confidential
I thought I had credentials, she cheated every inch though
It seemed inconsequential; how could I find her out?
Wasn't hard, I'd find his house and in an instant fights broke out
Then I close my eyes and PLOW, you’re gone and I forget
Now I’m filled with this regret, still remember how I wept
And December was a mess, man for real I can’t accept
How you did me, shit, I'm wishing you did it to someone else
Been through hell and five years, when I get to see you next
You will get to see me rich, and then I’ll need some respect


We expect to get it
Need respect? Forget it
You didn’t pay your price
So accept this sentence
You’ll go away for life
Sent to die in the trenches
So much for staying, right?
No respect for these bitches!

Complete shit. Go home. /deletesystem32nowplz




Naw, that was good. When was this written?

[Mr.DGAF]

Around September of 2010 I think haha. Old school.

[Spyder]

yeah idk what this thread is but Sam never ghost for me

shits hilarious thought tho

[Sam.]

yeah idk what this thread is but Sam never ghost for me

shits hilarious thought tho

[JamaicanPattlez]

This was an old verse I was gonna write with JamaicanPattlez and Geno, I was just coming out of a block...it was for our song "Hell On Earth" or something, but I ended up scrapping it and re-writing something completely different:

I'd say the lyrics on the page is when my spirits drains its rage
It's a shame this is off the dome so you should fear, insanely crazed
Rancid plagued razor blades Ale, G and Jamaican spray
If money talks then I'm a god since I'm makin' profits
Been like this since a baby? Nonsense, I'm Satan's lost kid
Welcome to my personality, dwellin' on this cursed reality
Depress kickin' in like angry journalists, is there a worse analogy?
Probly not, stop the clock< I gotta topic I wanna knock

I didn't even end up finishing it, it seems lmao Ugh...I feel so wack just reading it, although the "depress" line made me lol, maybe I'll use it again.

I don't think it's whack, but I liked the final version better. I completely forgot about this.

[Sam.]

JP's back!

Where you been?

[JamaicanPattlez]

JP's back!

Where you been?

I've been around man, haha. I notice you're back too! Decided to check out the CW finally after taking some time to really work on my writing and whatnot. I've swung around here and there but yeah!


... I was gonna say something cool and awesome about coming back, but I forgot what I was gonna say.

[Mr.DGAF]

Just post a link to Not Afraid man. That's the coolest way to address coming back.

[Sam.]

Welcome back, anyway. Something cool and awesome in my praise? Go ahead.

[JamaicanPattlez]

You guys should shut up and feed Ego's new drop.

Well, JP should. Sam already did.

I'm on it.

[Sam.]

This is part of the political verse that I was writing, didn't save it properly. Forget what I wrote, so when I went back and checked, all I found was this:

It's like obama sayin "I am still relevant”,
You’re either with us or against us,
"Opposed to terrorism" stop this worthless babble

I might finish this before apocalypse.

[SliK]

Good thread. Here's my contribution

So bad in bed this limp prick has to fake his orgasms
when i fuck your girl my dick twich can make her jaw spasm
after all, all that a thick bitch really takes is more dragging
pretty lucky i think that she didn't break my claw tractor (haha)
game's over, i win, better hit the brakes ya poor bastard
or i'll stomp ya fuckin' face, 'til it makes the floor shatter
i'm layin' waste to yall rappers, can you take some more laughter?
or ya sore as Gyllenhall after Heath had raped his poor asshole?
flow with such skill n force peeps mistake for lords rapture

That was written the first time I got baked after going months without getting stoned.

[SliK]

I wasn't very happy with it, it's a mess, and the rhymes are a bit too stretched in some points. But that's why I never posted it I guess. Thanks

[J.R.]

Track was called, "The Warning"
Was gonna be full of subliminal s. There's only one in that. lol.

I remember back when this forum was breathin with life,
Now everbody's borin me, feedin them big stars, your feelin me-
right? I don't wanna name drop, but I'm tired of seein feed on
people with the top-ic, like goddamit stop it! Haters seethe on,
Remember when new people joined and rapped? That'll forever be gone,
because we're too deep into our ego's, rap? What a laugh, more like sing along
One love for this place, but with all you "stars" taking feed, we runnin out of space!
And I was tryin' to fix it, but I'm bout to give up on that chase, I just can't save this (late!)
So that's right bitch, ima Ditch, like ding dong.