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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Emadyville » Jul 18th, '12, 06:04

the overall rhymes in all verse were completely nuts. hands down the lyrics were dope all around. Not much more I can say with rhymes like that, good job both of you
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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Wreck » Jul 18th, '12, 06:22

Emadyville wrote:the overall rhymes in all verse were completely nuts. hands down the lyrics were dope all around. Not much more I can say with rhymes like that, good job both of you


Thanks for the feed man, I'll PM you about our upcoming collab too.
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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Sam. » Jul 19th, '12, 00:22

Just rhyming, I see. Dope rhymes there by wreck, completely ruled this collab. Nothing about the content that I liked, seemed pretty random to me. Geno tried to tell a story, it was not that impressive, but was passable. Good collab, though, lacked the spark of a duo, but, individually dope.
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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Eedee » Jul 19th, '12, 00:47

Yup, lots of rhymes. It's a good piece for what it is: rhymes. As Sam said, didn't feel much like a collab rather than two guys dropping random verses together. Which is perfectly fine because this didn't have much of a concept to it other than rhyming your asses off. :y:
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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Jul 19th, '12, 01:05

Nice rhymes on both parts. great lyricism guys, I'm jealous of both of yall! lol this was really good it flowed great! I liked every verse Also, I love the inners, I think thats the key to get a verse to flow great using long lines Idk tho, great job.
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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Wreck » Jul 19th, '12, 03:42

Sam. wrote:Just rhyming, I see. Dope rhymes there by wreck, completely ruled this collab. Nothing about the content that I liked, seemed pretty random to me. Geno tried to tell a story, it was not that impressive, but was passable. Good collab, though, lacked the spark of a duo, but, individually dope.


Thanks for the feed, & the compliments man, appreciate it. & Geno did his thing, yo man I think for our next collab Geno we should do a concept collab over a beat again, but instead of just spittin like we did here, tell a story.

Eedee wrote:Yup, lots of rhymes. It's a good piece for what it is: rhymes. As Sam said, didn't feel much like a collab rather than two guys dropping random verses together. Which is perfectly fine because this didn't have much of a concept to it other than rhyming your asses off. :y:


Thanks for the feed & compliment- appreciate it.

ShAdYTiLIDie wrote:Nice rhymes on both parts. great lyricism guys, I'm jealous of both of yall! lol this was really good it flowed great! I liked every verse Also, I love the inners, I think thats the key to get a verse to flow great using long lines Idk tho, great job.


Thanks man, appreciate it. Well if you wanna spit, I can help you out, it took me a long ass time to get me where I'm at lyrically, it's not easy, & I appreciate the kind words. & yeah inners are slept on, not easy to do :D.
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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Wreck » Jul 19th, '12, 04:23

Geno wrote:PM me. I'm down. :y:


Got it. Gonna find a good beat for something deep :y:.

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For real, for what this was, it was great. Rhymes, rhymes, rhymes. Good stuff guys.


Haha thanks bro, appreciate the feed. Gonna listen to Syllables now lol.
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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Gummybur » Jul 19th, '12, 04:24

Wreck,

That was just butter....fuck. I'll get there soon >:[.

"It's like I rummaged through your chest and stole a lung or two."

Fuck I love that Geno..
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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Gummybur » Jul 19th, '12, 04:37

Oh Geno, we've all re-read or listened to Em's tracks and caught a metaphor after like...what, 200 listens?

They ARE awesome. It's not really my territory because you know I've been in this for around 2 or 3 months. But if a line is to complex or a metaphor is to complicated to understand the first time around, chances are the person will get it in days, or weeks from now. It usually pans out to be that "OHHH SHIT!" *RUN IN CIRCLE BALL GRAB* type of thing. You know what I'm saying....right...or do I sound insane.
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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Wreck » Jul 19th, '12, 04:46

Gummybur wrote:Wreck,

That was just butter....fuck. I'll get there soon >:[.

"It's like I rummaged through your chest and stole a lung or two."

Fuck I love that Geno..


:y: thanks bro, appreciate it.
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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Sam. » Jul 19th, '12, 21:18

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Sam. wrote:Just rhyming, I see. Dope rhymes there by wreck, completely ruled this collab. Nothing about the content that I liked, seemed pretty random to me. Geno tried to tell a story, it was not that impressive, but was passable. Good collab, though, lacked the spark of a duo, but, individually dope.

I didn't "try" to tell a story.

I just rhymed. That's all it was, that's why the title is "Words"

Thanks guys. :y:

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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Wreck » Jul 20th, '12, 06:51

Sam. wrote:
Geno wrote:
Sam. wrote:Just rhyming, I see. Dope rhymes there by wreck, completely ruled this collab. Nothing about the content that I liked, seemed pretty random to me. Geno tried to tell a story, it was not that impressive, but was passable. Good collab, though, lacked the spark of a duo, but, individually dope.

I didn't "try" to tell a story.

I just rhymed. That's all it was, that's why the title is "Words"

Thanks guys. :y:

Oh, fine. :worship: :worship:


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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Wreck » Jul 21st, '12, 07:02

InsaneTRex94 wrote:This is pretty sick, I don't have much time to give good feed but great job, both of you :y:

@Geno, I sorta didnt' finish my verse for our collab on time lmao. But I doubt you or Menzo even got to it either. I'll get to it when I can, I've been getting more and more ideas, each sicker and more twisted than the last, but I've not had time to actually write rhymes.


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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Sam. » Jul 21st, '12, 23:01

Wreck wrote:See you in hell for the sequel, we'll be waiting.

I beg your pardon, sire?
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Re: Wreck ft. Geno - Words

Postby Wreck » Jul 22nd, '12, 23:39

Sam. wrote:[quote="Wreck"
See you in hell for the sequel, we'll be waiting.

I beg your pardon, sire?[/quote]

Another Geno/Wreck collab, equally as sick, coming soon to a forum near you.
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