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Re: Freestyle

Postby Wreck » Jul 25th, '12, 04:03

Emadyville wrote:nah man, i work too much plus my weekdays i never really know how long i'll work, and weekends they've been scheduling me to work doubles (gotta work 22 hrs sat/sun in addition to my 40+ this week) so it's best i dont. plus i love judging them, done it a few times by commission or randomly they ask me cause i'm a gmod or when i was admin or whatever, but yeah the most i'll do now is judge but i appreciate the offer.

btw we def gotta work on something withing the next week


We def. will :y:.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Emadyville » Jul 25th, '12, 04:18

Menzo wrote:
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Geno wrote:I still bump it haha



you still bump my album?


I do, I have the CD in my car.


man, i know you told me that like a few (maybe many many) months ago, but you honestly have no idea what that means to me. Even if you listen to the album once a month, fucking means more to me than anything else :sweating:
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Emadyville » Jul 26th, '12, 03:22

you guys are the shit haha
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Wreck » Jul 26th, '12, 04:04

Emadyville wrote:you guys are the shit haha


I just listened to most of your tape today & last night, fucking dope man, your flow was equally as impressive as the structure/lyrics of the respective songs on there, we def. gotta do more collabs down the line, after the hot shit we're putting out soon on here :shifty:. Good job bro.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Emadyville » Jul 26th, '12, 04:24

Wreck wrote:
Emadyville wrote:you guys are the shit haha


I just listened to most of your tape today & last night, fucking dope man, your flow was equally as impressive as the structure/lyrics of the respective songs on there, we def. gotta do more collabs down the line, after the hot shit we're putting out soon on here :shifty:. Good job bro.


I'm glad you liked it. Still sucks that was what it was, in hindsight maybe my last album and the last shit basically i recorded.

Can I ask you tho, esp since I don't know you know you, what stood out? As in rhymes, songs in general, topics, flows, etc. And at the same time, what wasn't good or you didn't like?

I always like to hear the good and the bad so if you can give any insight for me I'd appreciate it.

And btw, I have about 70 other songs or more that were done before that, mixtapes and albums or random songs/collabs.

And finally, just so you know, I went for some different shit on every song on the album. I tried to have the pump up song, the lyrical song, the girl/love song, the different song, the party/club song, the personal song, the banger song, and the rest was what it was. I went for everything, to be a mix for an album of only 10 songs.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Wreck » Jul 26th, '12, 05:00

Emadyville wrote:
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Emadyville wrote:you guys are the shit haha


I just listened to most of your tape today & last night, fucking dope man, your flow was equally as impressive as the structure/lyrics of the respective songs on there, we def. gotta do more collabs down the line, after the hot shit we're putting out soon on here :shifty:. Good job bro.


I'm glad you liked it. Still sucks that was what it was, in hindsight maybe my last album and the last shit basically i recorded.

Can I ask you tho, esp since I don't know you know you, what stood out? As in rhymes, songs in general, topics, flows, etc. And at the same time, what wasn't good or you didn't like?

I always like to hear the good and the bad so if you can give any insight for me I'd appreciate it.

And btw, I have about 70 other songs or more that were done before that, mixtapes and albums or random songs/collabs.

And finally, just so you know, I went for some different shit on every song on the album. I tried to have the pump up song, the lyrical song, the girl/love song, the different song, the party/club song, the personal song, the banger song, and the rest was what it was. I went for everything, to be a mix for an album of only 10 songs.


That's funny because I do the same EXACT thing, formula wise, with my music/album material. I think it's a great idea when artists like us do that, appeal to all masses, but still staying true to yourself w/ the music :y:.

& why is it your last album? You seem young, & you've got a lot of talent & drive like I do, ever thought about shipping your shit around? like CDbaby.com, etc. stuff like that to get a buzz & to make money at the same time? You should.

& I'm at That's A Rap, so track 6 of 11 on the tape. So far, every song I've thoroughly enjoyed, you love to throw in the multis like a lot of us here do, just so it flows great, & speaking of the flow, your technique, flow, breathing- all 3 were real good. I would say, just to make a critique, that you throw in a few more punches. You're lyrical enough that you can easily get away w/ having a great song w/ tons of multis, but that's really my only big piece of advice, as far as the record & your music is concerned, from what I've heard thus far. I can post a few comments about each track as I go back & listen, but I really liked the originality & creativity you put in making a song called Stream of Unconsciousness. The 3 records had a simple message/ideology to them, & they came out great. Nice work.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Emadyville » Jul 26th, '12, 05:05

Appreciate it man, and thanks for the feed and listening. My last album...maybe cause as of now I can't record at home, where i did a bunch of songs in the past, and where i recorded and planned to continue, the guy went into drug rehab like a week after my album was done so I never went back, heard he lost the studio. So as of now I'm in limbo.

if you ever want more tracks lemme know, i have a bunch, but again, appreciate the feed. In terms of punches and that shit, I wrote that album literally as it came, I found a beat, if it worked i wrote a song then recorded it, I didn't have the time to really make an album, if that makes sense. And I'm glad you liked and noticed the multis, someone else on here when it came out commented to me how every song was filled with them, and it means a lot when people notice that you spent the time and did the work to make all of them and have them work.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Wreck » Jul 26th, '12, 05:08

Emadyville wrote:Appreciate it man, and thanks for the feed and listening. My last album...maybe cause as of now I can't record at home, where i did a bunch of songs in the past, and where i recorded and planned to continue, the guy went into drug rehab like a week after my album was done so I never went back, heard he lost the studio. So as of now I'm in limbo.

if you ever want more tracks lemme know, i have a bunch, but again, appreciate the feed. In terms of punches and that shit, I wrote that album literally as it came, I found a beat, if it worked i wrote a song then recorded it, I didn't have the time to really make an album, if that makes sense. And I'm glad you liked and noticed the multis, someone else on here when it came out commented to me how every song was filled with them, and it means a lot when people notice that you spent the time and did the work to make all of them and have them work.


No worries man, & wow that sounds rough. Sucks for that dude, & you as well, because now you're without a place to record, for the moment at least.

& I understand, & yeah I'm a perfectionist myself, & love lyricism, so noticing multis just becomes a habit of looking for them in songs haha. Well I would definitely sign you if I made it big & had my own label to work with, you can't beat real talent nowadays in music.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Emadyville » Jul 26th, '12, 05:11

Yeah I feel you, i always listen for multis, to me it shows not only skill but talent and someone who cares and wants to be true to hip-hop.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Wreck » Jul 26th, '12, 05:14

Emadyville wrote:Yeah I feel you, i always listen for multis, to me it shows not only skill but talent and someone who cares and wants to be true to hip-hop.


Yeah definitely, the true craft of it.
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