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Re: Ego - Acquatic Ambiance

Postby SajN » Aug 1st, '12, 02:31

Wack.


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Re: Ego - Acquatic Ambiance

Postby Eedee » Aug 1st, '12, 10:02

Menzo wrote:Woke up, in an ocean of water
Hopin' to float but my boat is improper
Buoyant? Nope, it's just awkward
No one to offer a bone to this dog (woof!)
Deeper the breath, I submerge in the depths


That line really stood out as fucking "why is that in there?"...

The rhymes were good, the colors of the lyrics really hastened me to erection. Solid drop.

Bee tee dubz, it's "aquatic" not "acquatic". :y:
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Re: Ego - Aquatic Ambiance

Postby Sam. » Aug 2nd, '12, 00:33

Decent drop guys. I don't know what to say. Just solid rhymes.


Sorry for the one line feed.
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Re: Ego - Aquatic Ambiance

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 2nd, '12, 01:39

Yeah, obviously I like the rhymes. Good stuff there, typical though. I always enjoy when a piece goes for long periods of time just rapping. That's impressive stuff.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Ego - Aquatic Ambiance

Postby Eedee » Aug 2nd, '12, 02:00

Geno wrote:Menzo makes thread

Blames Geno for typo

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Haha, thanks for peepin' it Eedee. It's old, and we obviously didn't think it was up to standards to release / finish, but looking back it wasn't too bad lyrically, so we decided to drop it .


Forever Ge-no.

And yeah, no problem. It wasn't bad lyrically. :y:
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Re: Ego - Aquatic Ambiance

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 2nd, '12, 03:10

I'm fighting for that quotable too haha, hopefully tonight I'll drop something worthy.
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Re: Ego - Aquatic Ambiance

Postby ShadysDisciple » Aug 7th, '12, 21:08

Geno wrote:Menzo makes thread

Blames Geno for typo

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Forever A-Mole :shifty:

On Topic: This was dope! You guys have undeniable chemistry as a duo and I can tell you really feed off eachother.

Best lines from Menzo:
Woke up, in an ocean of water
Hopin' to float but my boat is improper
Buoyant? Nope, it's just awkward

and

The liquid around gets colder and darker
Alone and my guards up, auras in the zone,

Best lines from Geno:

Will Hip Hop live, will we fail in the quest?
Rather mail in the check than just stay with the rest,

and

I'll instill my spark in my alias now,
Woulda killed my heart lettin' Alieus drown,
So I favour him now as my right hand man,
We'll be saving the sound as we light this land,

Really good drop guys.
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