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Re: Open Letter (TRShady Tape #9)

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 11th, '12, 21:58

I liked that man, it seems like a piece that has come together organically and I really love verses that are genuine like that. The rhyming was interesting and the references were a good addition to the good choice of words.
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Re: Open Letter (TRShady Tape #9)

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 13th, '12, 13:52

name wrote:
Slim Fiasco wrote:I liked that man, it seems like a piece that has come together organically and I really love verses that are genuine like that. The rhyming was interesting and the references were a good addition to the good choice of words.


Thanks man, why did you bail on writing since fiasco experiment was over doe? Image


Well, I haven't even thought about it tbh, so it wasn't a conscious decision to not write. Plus the magazine thing is kinda enough writing on English for now, haha. But I'll definitely drop some piece in September.
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Re: Open Letter (TRShady Tape #9)

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 14th, '12, 10:31

InsaneTRex94 wrote:I sorta remember I had writer's block at one point and wrote a verse about it, mine was a bit more down my lane though. Talking something about fucking a whore with AIDS then raping the rest of the whore house or something so everyone will get AIDS just because I was pissed that I couldn't write a rap, you know, standard stuff. I got the idea from Joell Ortiz. But I like your verse more than I like the one I wrote. This is pretty fucking good.


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Re: Open Letter (TRShady Tape #9)

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 14th, '12, 11:13

Hahaha, well it was me who ghostwrote it for him so I figured I should take that as a compliment for me. :shifty:
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Re: Open Letter (TRShady Tape #9)

Postby Slim Fiasco » Aug 14th, '12, 12:52

name wrote:
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Slim Fiasco wrote:Hahaha, well it was me who ghostwrote it for him so I figured I should take that as a compliment for me. :shifty:

I had a feeling you were going to say this tbh...and I wouldn't be suprised.


He saves his best verses for me. :shifty:


Definitely. And then I give the filler verses to Lupe, that's why Lasers didn't come out right :8)
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Re: Open Letter (TRShady Tape #9)

Postby Gummybur » Aug 16th, '12, 06:32

"Just needs a couple ***** to push it through with some nitro
You may even bite some lyrics that may ignite you
You may even rhyme no sentences that you write bro
Just spread a message that's relevant or intelligent
Or a persona, or a movie, or a concept or a spiritual
Or just something else to listen to, spit that Wondarama shit
So me and my conglomerates can catch up with the finest shit
I'm outta this"

This part flowed so well buddy! Even if it wasn't a keystyle it's still dope as fuck. :wave:

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Re: Open Letter (TRShady Tape #9)

Postby Gummybur » Aug 16th, '12, 06:32

"Just needs a couple ***** to push it through with some nitro
You may even bite some lyrics that may ignite you
You may even rhyme no sentences that you write bro
Just spread a message that's relevant or intelligent
Or a persona, or a movie, or a concept or a spiritual
Or just something else to listen to, spit that Wondarama shit
So me and my conglomerates can catch up with the finest shit
I'm outta this"

This part flowed so well buddy! Even if it wasn't a keystyle it's still dope as fuck. :wave:

Good job dude.
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