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Come Out Of The Closet (Eedee & Geno Diss)

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Come Out Of The Closet (Eedee & Geno Diss)

Postby Atone » Sep 24th, '12, 17:30

kind of a quick last minute decision to do this, gonna keep the back and forth game goin here

(Verse)
I diss you, you diss me, i leave i bet you miss me
miss E, i bet you wanna kiss me
mr. tongue n cheeks but you wanna touch my lips G
that aint right,
I bust one, you bust back, but you aint sayin nothin
talkin that talk actin like you really sayin somethin
wanna start a beef for fun? homie quit frontin
you on my nuts cuz you wanna feed off my game
take my shine and run with it - you so lame
this aint even real beef, i'm dissin a dude with keyboard shit
should cut the ethernet and beat em with a cordless
your the ugly sperm your mother should of aborted
come to think of it, she probably couldn't afford it
that's why for christmas you open the gift rap
find a used toy from goodwill, homie you really live that
tryin to go at creative control, have you really sunk that low?
can't be friends with pussy bitches, punk ass hoes
fuck a wrong adress i'mma follow you to your cardboard box
with gasoline and matches, light it, stand back and watch
Ego is really an Acronym for Eedee & Geno Equals Odd Couple
you gay lovers suckin each other and snuggle
just come out and admit you get the dick
that's really why you mad, so hurry up and quit this shit

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Re: Come Out Of The Closet (Eedee & Geno Diss)

Postby Atone » Sep 24th, '12, 17:58

Geno wrote:Why the hell do you keep dissing me? I never even wrote a response.


just for play man, if you don't wanna be apart of it i'll keep you out,
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Re: Come Out Of The Closet (Eedee & Geno Diss)

Postby Atone » Sep 24th, '12, 18:54

lol, alright man, get at me hard, that's what keeps this board entertaining
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Re: Come Out Of The Closet (Eedee & Geno Diss)

Postby SoldierShady » Sep 24th, '12, 19:36

Fail thread. :facepalm: Fuck outta here B.
"So one last time, I'm back, 'fore it fades into black and it's all over, behold the final chapter in the saga, trying to recapture that lightning trapped in a bottle twice, the magic that started it all...tragic portrait of an artist tortured....trapped in his own drawings..." - Bruce.

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Re: Come Out Of The Closet (Eedee & Geno Diss)

Postby Eedee » Sep 24th, '12, 21:12

Ight.
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Re: Come Out Of The Closet (Eedee & Geno Diss)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Sep 24th, '12, 21:22

There were some good/creative lines but this wasn't your best piece man. I really didn't dig this too much at all, seems like a step back from where you were stylistically. The multies aren't as abundant, and that's okay, but I didn't see anything that could make up for that lack of substance. Some nice flips helped but other than that I have to say this piece didn't really impress me. The shots were kinda weak, I know you said it was last minute but still, you should've tried harder on the personal front. Most of these disses could apply to anyone.

This didn't seem like your best effort, but it's all good.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Come Out Of The Closet (Eedee & Geno Diss)

Postby J.R. » Sep 24th, '12, 23:30

I'm not in this, but this was decent ish . Why're you dissing Geno?
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