Scandal (Emulation Day 1)

[CrashBand]

Went for a horror-core(ish) styled verse focused on rhyming.

I smoke on the mic, like smoking Joe Frazier
Smoking dope, blazing and overdose later
I’m here to terrorize get you scared to fear your life
No one can escape my all seeing pair of eyes
No time, Tick- Tock, Don’t quit and keep ticking
I’m on an sick distinct mission, to slit sixteen children
Not with Ropes or Blades but with Lethal Injections
With no exceptions .……………..it’s Code red Danger!
Giving shots that can-kill, it’s too hot to handle
I'm the reason for your town’s most gossiped scandal
Instpectah Deck it’s time to step aside and accept I’m the best
Crash is here now, and I’ll rip you head from your neck!

________________________________________

(original)

I smoke on the mic like smokin' Joe Frazier
The hell-raiser, raising hell with the flavor
Terrorize the jam like troops in Pakistan
Swinging through your town like your neighborhood Spiderman
So uhh, tick tock keep ticking
While I get you flipping off the shit I'm kicking
The Lone Ranger, code red: danger!
Deep in the dark with the art to rip the charts apart
The vandal, too hot to handle
You battle, you're saying goodbye like Tevin Campbell
Roughneck, Inspectah Deck's on the set
The rebel, I make more noise than heavy metal

[Slim Fiasco]

Haha, the last line was dope with you addressing Deck, and I like how you flipped the subject matter. That's what this game is all about.

[Eedee]

Yeah you added some more syllables here and there but it was fucking awesome rhyming.

I like these Games. Woot!

[Mr.DGAF]

Really liked the flow on this. The first two lines flowed so well, it was crazy. I like how you interpreted it too, instead of just keeping the scheme. Good stuff.