Rapping is nice & My Lie

[Words]

Just a bit of a freeverse here, my first drop in a while. Jumped around on topics a bit, sorry about that. LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=147327

So you're the next best thing, to hit the fucking scene?
Well I'm the next best thing since the next best thing,
are you kidding, you adore these half-assed MC's?
If their next hit doesn't disturb you deeply,
you probably need your hearing checked-
CAN YOU HEAR ME?
As I flow to beats just so beautifully
you can truly see me and what I truly mean
Gimme the mic, let me recite, what is on my mind
scratch that and let me rewrite, rapping is nice
when you rap about what actually matters in your life.
Like I might drop a line, about grabbing this mic,
and spilling my heart out, in the middle of the night
putting the pen down and quitting, is my number one fright
It really bites, being nothing more than "that guy"
and that's why I go back to the pad, trying to write....
And then at the same time-
I'm logging on the computer, trying to get in a fight
with someone in youtube comments like,
"Goddamnit lollol! u didnt sp3ll th@t right!"
Trolling on the internet with an iron fist
Cause that's really just what Casey is
He's kind of an idiot, who gets in trouble with
people by running this mouth and he's getting pissed
at people who won't leave him home alone
like Culkin, please don't call me on the telephone
I want my time to sit inside of my mind
at the end of the day, it's time to uwind
I sit in my chair, music on and close the blinds
I lock the door check'n twice, and I'm confined
if you come to my door, then you'll be denied.
My head is my own space where I go to hide
No need for any conversation, nope I'm fine
Falsely rapping about the truth, cause that last line....
that was a lie.

[Eedee]

you probably need your hearing checked-
CAN YOU HEAR ME?

That had me laughing Just the nonchalance of it was hilarious, I think. Reminded me of some vintage prime Eminem humor right there.

You had very simplistic rhymes but still had me entertained.

Good drop.