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Geno - Funeral (Emulation Day 2)

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Re: Geno - Funeral (Emulation Day 2)

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Oct 6th, '12, 03:42

Wow, this must've been difficult to do. It hurts my head just thinking about how to rhyme/match every sylablle in that long ass verse, not to mention stay coherent. Nice work though. You did a good job at remaining on topic. It got off subject and kind of random sounding at some points, but that's expected. It's very hard not to make it sound forced. Cool stuff. I'm not even going to attempt this hahhaa fuck that.
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Re: Geno - Funeral (Emulation Day 2)

Postby CrashBand » Oct 7th, '12, 09:54

Very impressive. :y:

Pretty much rhyme for rhyme. (and as coherent as possible, haha).

I might change the rhyme scheme's up so we don't get a hundred 'petty ho's'.

But I'll (try to) keep the same patterns, flow and syllables.
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Re: Geno - Funeral (Emulation Day 2)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Oct 20th, '12, 00:49

Man, Geno I'm mind-blown'd. You executed it perfectly, I'm speechless. I don't think I saw this because I wasn't online during this time period. I woulda switched the verse if only I knew people would hate it. Sorry to everybody

Anyway Geno, this shit is incredible :worship:
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Re: Geno - Funeral (Emulation Day 2)

Postby Ubb » Oct 20th, '12, 23:48

You're really good, Geno. I'm shit compared to you, i'm impressed man.
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Re: Geno - Funeral (Emulation Day 2)

Postby Ubb » Oct 21st, '12, 14:16

@Geno - Nah man, I'm a chicken, I don't have the balls to post some of my lyrics. I'm pretty bad anyway, maybe one day I'll do it.
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Re: Geno - Funeral (Emulation Day 2)

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Nov 23rd, '12, 01:43

Oh Shit nice job dude, i read the verse and thought it was pretty damn good already ten I realize you rhymed every word from somebody else's verse?! Fucjing dope dude nice job keep it ip
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