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[Just Silver]

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Any feed is nice its been a while

The old school, new school shouldve went to two schools
Emcee, whose you, better have a blues clue
If not kick rocks on mountain tops
My words have surrounded blocks and sounded hot
As if they were cops but of course were not
On a course and a plot thats as coarse as a forfeited twat
Im not staying like orphans often trying to force it
As i speak the truth while I ignored it
Reading through all the coordinates
Making sense or making more of it
Attempts of exploring shit
Under all of it my lines rely on trees like an ornament
Rap I'm supporting it but most are a fraud to it
Speak all fradulent not me pardon them
Weed smoke smogs my lens till the truth comes they all pretend

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Bump

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Bored so.. bump

[Sam.]

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Why

[Sam.]

For feed, fool.

[Just Silver]

For feed, fool.

I know lol but what's the chance

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Last bump might as well there's no activity anymore