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My Life - Quick 16

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My Life - Quick 16

Postby Element. » Dec 14th, '12, 21:12

just quick 16 and just trying different ways of writing haven't been on here awhile but hopefully I will be posting more soon, I'm not liking things around my area and I don't just let anyone into my life hence the first line.


This is my life, get the fuck out and stand back
I'm fed up of fake cunts, who pout and then slack
so if I feel down, put my doubt on a track
got my boys back, so then just shout an smack
but these days, I find it hard to trust
keep myself to myself man, my guard is a must
I feel lost, in my yard that seems full of rust
I'ma just an outcast, nobody wants to even chat
its just like this, pullin names out of a hat
and some bitches, even wanna play games with Matt
I'm fed up with everyone, put flames on that skat
I hate my past, I know I can't change it
time to rearrange, instead of rant about shit
and to the haters, that think I should just quit
its motivation, if your stood just shut up and sit
I'll get my pen and pad, and continue to spit.
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Re: My Life - Quick 16

Postby Element. » Dec 14th, '12, 21:24

Okayyy man, Just not long came back here just starting to enjoy writing again
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Re: My Life - Quick 16

Postby Hopsinshadie » Dec 17th, '12, 19:27

very good
Da MEDIA made into me a modern-day Genghis KHAN AT aint NO GAME DOG!
    Try to argue It was just entertainment dawg Entertainment DOG!
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Re: My Life - Quick 16

Postby Spyder » Dec 18th, '12, 02:24

hey bro this is a few days old so ima lock it

pm me when u get a LOF
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