tadpole25
De'anumb Halftongue
Controversy never hurts me - that's why I'm a fire starter/
Till I reach a hearse, dug deep in dirt, we die as martyrs/
When you bleed, get up, to me it only means try harder/
And to mother earth, no one's worth trying to outsmart her/
Matriarch to the globe smart enough to give us her armor, as we departure into the unknown/
Going up against karma star struck punching her lights out going nova in super mode/
Intruder alert eluding two soldiers living by the trooper code/
In pursuit of tokens sneaking in unnoticed at a moments notice shooting for gold/
Taking the loot, but sometimes I'm weak and I attest that it's not a feat to see me cheat and lie/
But you kids are far from the best and I don't see you in time as next in line to get beatified/
Two soldiers, open Fi- on those who joke and won't comply/
Just hope that I'm, not the one to put the gun to your head and blow you out your mind like my rhymes/
Whenever I'm MCing cuz my arsenal is apart from all the parts n' tools in my van/
To send you to the hospital, enough to make you bleedin and/
You'll need to be immediately treated, soon after your perception of dope rhymes changes at last/
Once you read Halftongues and mine, you'll throw yours in the trash/
After you throw them lyrics in the trash go back and piss on them/
Two mystics from the past sent to mince n demolish, a shift in the cause causing you bitches to fall again/
Why you sobbing with those tears darlin? oh cause your guardian isn't watchin/ Well get lost kid, you and your friend or we'll be knockin/
Down your door a notch above politely walkin in/
Poppin off shots like two cops that have lost it/
Dropping bombs like camacauseE's so drop it/
Your battle shit has just lost so call it what you want to call it, we ball like the dead relatives of aliens when were ballin making the dust go poof in the pocket going long throwing bombs cause were on it! Fucking kamikaze's!
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Alieus/Geno
One of two faces up in this bitch,
The other one waits and he comes to assist,
Stuck in the Matrix clutchin' a pill,
On my tongue I can taste it, numbin' my limbs
Whose dumb to enrage twin sons of a bitch?
Those cunts JR, Pain, SliK jump off the bridge
Fuck your complacence, smug little kids
Whose stuff do you praise still? Us, Sit 'N Spin
You must be mistaken bud, do you think,
You're above what we're makin'? What is this shit?
We're chuckin' your lame script crumplin' it,
Rather fuck with a Wayne hit, sputative fixed
Leave you stunned in amazement bumpin' our disc,
While we're comin' to take this, judges witness
Ego's clutch and reclaimin' this fuckin' business,
All you chumps in the game can suck on our dicks
How much can you take bitch? None look at this,
When we punch they evade it, duck to be missed
Destructive with cadence too much for these kids
Ego’s buzz gets ‘em faded, muster the whips
They’re flustered and jaded; it’s us for the win
We’re studs in this game still bunchin’ up chicks
Who lust for our names, yet jump when we’re pissed
So what do you gain from runnin’ your lips?
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ROUND 1 VOTING SHEET: Back'N'Forth
[5] Chemistry (How well did they work together. Important for this round)
[3] Rhyming/Multis
[2] Complexity (How complex were the thoughts/rhyme schemes?)
[1] Flow
[1] Vocabulary (Word choice and lexicon)
[1] Structure (How presentable and easy to read was the verse?)
[1]* WOW! Factor (A particular phrase or rhyme that stood out)
* This point can be added at judge's discretion, but is not mandatory.
Note: By writing to a beat, flow can be better achieved and may help the judges vote for the Flow point.