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The Art of Rap Freestyle

Postby EmTV » Mar 2nd, '13, 16:38

http://youtube.com/watch?v=BS7NCfdRMIs

I started listening to this freestyle recently and I think it's fucking sick. Especially this part, the flow is mmm

"At the Ozzfest with Nas bumpin' Das EFX in a wrecked up Datsun and dropped two extra strength Watson Vicodin out my pocket"

Shit is sick.

What do you think?
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Re: The Art of Rap Freestyle

Postby EminemBase » Mar 2nd, '13, 18:38

Well I love the fact he's mentioning hip-hop themes more often (other rappers, The Source etc.), just feels more authentic and like he's saying his piece on things relevant to the culture, rather than shoving shit up asses which realistically is fairly useless, despite me loving Relapse to death.

And I love the fact he shows no signs of laying off the gas in terms of pushing the rhyme schemes and flows to new heights, he's REALLY focused on words and rhymes again, which is the main thing for me. Which is also why I'm so 'anti-inrospection', as when he gets into that state of just documenting his life, he writes himself into a corner and lyricism takes a back seat to the drama.

There was a point (Encore) where he stopped caring about the rhymes and his lyrics so much because it became all about settling scores and telling us something about his life... which to me is boring. First and foremost, he's a lyricist, who's capable of re-defining the boundaries every time he puts pen to paper, so it's just a fucking waste if he isn't constantly trying to do that, but rather just recounting an experience or telling us why he's had a bad day, at the expense of what he does best.
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Re: The Art of Rap Freestyle

Postby ShadyxEminem » Mar 2nd, '13, 19:45

"Drunk as fuck
One sock pulling my boxers up with boxing gloves
But I keep dropping my fucking binoculars
Got two fucking hydroxycuts and four oxy's stuck in my esophagus
These three lesbian little stocky sluts
Thought I swallowed two hockey pucks
Started screamin' "Serves you right you cocky fuck!
That's what you get for mockin' us
Ain't as cool as you thought you was."
Bitch all I did when I walked up was have my dick in a sock
And it's a sock puppet so no strings attached you can all suck it
(Chick-uh) get it? Ah fuck it
Shits about to get hairy as motherfucking Chewbacca's nuts
Cocksuckers"

That part sounds so MMLP-ish
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Re: The Art of Rap Freestyle

Postby EminemBase » Mar 2nd, '13, 19:49

Revolutionary wrote:
EminemBase wrote:Well I love the fact he's mentioning hip-hop themes more often (other rappers, The Source etc.), just feels more authentic and like he's saying his piece on things relevant to the culture, rather than shoving shit up asses which realistically is fairly useless, despite me loving Relapse to death.

And I love the fact he shows no signs of laying off the gas in terms of pushing the rhyme schemes and flows to new heights, he's REALLY focused on words and rhymes again, which is the main thing for me. Which is also why I'm so 'anti-inrospection', as when he gets into that state of just documenting his life, he writes himself into a corner and lyricism takes a back seat to the drama.

There was a point (Encore) where he stopped caring about the rhymes and his lyrics so much because it became all about settling scores and telling us something about his life... which to me is boring. First and foremost, he's a lyricist, who's capable of re-defining the boundaries every time he puts pen to paper, so it's just a fucking waste if he isn't constantly trying to do that, but rather just recounting an experience or telling us why he's had a bad day, at the expense of what he does best.

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Re: The Art of Rap Freestyle

Postby Francesco » Mar 3rd, '13, 00:47

Em giving love to legends people don't even know today shows how big a hip-hop fan he is, I go really pumped up when I first heard this shit!
This was really needy for Em actually 'cuz he dissed Eric Sermon in ''8 Mile'' when he battled those 3 cats at the end.
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Re: The Art of Rap Freestyle

Postby Eedee » Mar 5th, '13, 20:10

Loved this freestyle. Even without a beat it flowed extremely well and the rhyme schemes were pretty sick.

I can't wait to see what he does on his new album.
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Re: The Art of Rap Freestyle

Postby Willy » Mar 5th, '13, 23:04

It was pretty tight.. disliked the part about pulling his boxers up with boxing gloves and binoculars or whatever.
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Re: The Art of Rap Freestyle

Postby Francesco » Mar 6th, '13, 14:04

Amadeo wrote:
francesco wrote:Em giving love to legends people don't even know today shows how big a hip-hop fan he is, I go really pumped up when I first heard this shit!
This was really needy for Em actually 'cuz he dissed Eric Sermon in ''8 Mile'' when he battled those 3 cats at the end.

No he didn't. "You sound like Eric Sermon, the generic version"...he's saying the opponent is generic, not Eric Sermon.


What? He kind of imitates E's voice & implies this dude sounds like Eric Sermon who at times has had generic verses/songs. That's why he says ''Eric Sermon, THE generic version''. Of course it's not like a real diss 'cuz Em's always loved EPMD & their whole clique but this is not a nice thing to say for an OG . Still it's just a movie anyway of course, I'm not even saying E suppose to take offence or whatever.
Em giving mad props to Daz FX this way is definitely the way he have been treating many legends over the years, that's why I said it was NEEDY 'cuz what he said about Eric Sermon was unlikely for Eminem to say.
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Re: The Art of Rap Freestyle

Postby EmTV » Mar 7th, '13, 22:05

Aone10 wrote:Definitely a dope verse. I'm hoping the written material on his next album is similar to this. Does anybody know when that was actually recorded?


I reckon it was 2011, simply because of the style.
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Re: The Art of Rap Freestyle

Postby Mathers » Mar 7th, '13, 22:27

Aone10 wrote:Definitely a dope verse. I'm hoping the written material on his next album is similar to this. Does anybody know when that was actually recorded?

Mid 2011.
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Re: The Art of Rap Freestyle

Postby Mathers » Mar 7th, '13, 22:56

Aone10 wrote:Hmm....

Word is that he began working on his 8th album around that time....

Let's hope that's the mind set he was in for the writing process of it.

He announced that he started working on it last May.
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