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Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Spyder » Apr 22nd, '13, 19:34

LOF

Spyder
They told me, I couldn't battle it wasn't my thing
Pigeon hold me I showed in punches I'm king.
After they said I couldn't and I was being ghosted
Fire rose, shit then said I couldn't flow sick...
I worked, rhymed, rehearse verse double-time
Just another mile-stone I've thrown, chucked aside.
Then what, some shit bout my voice not appealing to all?
I feel ya, but you gonna critique something not really my fault?
I've line rhymed, strung some syllables so smooth
Inners, alliteration, lyrics in relations with the pro-tools.
I know you, tired from the punches I fought so hard to claim
So I tried writing something sought outside of my sparrin game.
OK, then how many tracks til your bored of my heart and pain
With this new EP I genre hop even display Rock some ways.
Same cats, said Just Silver couldn't keep up with me
Im'a let him go no subtlety, blow it up, like a running league

hook x2
You want the rhymes punchlines and all the flow?
Kick back, relax as we start our show
You've got some rap troubles we probably know
You should just listen to us, just listen to us

Just Silver
Started as a novice now i'm makin progress,i've got this
Me and Spyder high up in the cob webs but not forgotten
Flow used to be rotten like some eggs up in the garbage
Dog legs up on the topics i used to be pissed i wasn't shit
Couldn't fit, a visual,ignorant as Mystikal but more listenable
I progressed here's a list for you i'll start with the typical
Number one cumbersome when it comes to some of em
Dumb enough to try to keep rhyming and double up
Timing was another dud, couldn't place my mind of state
Smoking lime grapes and hoping my type changes
And so it had, roll the gas controlling what i have
Now i laugh at the old attempts, but i own my path
So flow in fact is like a seed in the grass,
Makes no sense like how i cheated in math
I've been beaten so bad like a half beat dad
but now i'm on track and i'm never lookin back

hook x2
You want the rhymes punchlines and all the flow?
Kick back, relax as we start our show
You've got some rap troubles we probably know
You should just listen to us, just listen to us
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Just Silver » Apr 22nd, '13, 19:39

so sick lol hope its not slept on
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby EmTV » Apr 22nd, '13, 20:07

I actually thought that was pretty dope. Spyder did great, I expected that, but Just Silver gave me a hardon. I didn't expect that shit. Subject Matter was good imo, multis, rhyming, flow. Spot-on. Brb gotta wash some pants.
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Just Silver » Apr 22nd, '13, 20:09

LOL thanks for the feed guy
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Spyder » Apr 22nd, '13, 20:13

haha thanks for the feed fam
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Francesco » Apr 28th, '13, 12:54

Nice! :y:
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Just Silver » Apr 28th, '13, 13:15

glad u enjoyed it guy
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Mr.DGAF » Apr 28th, '13, 18:46

This was dope dope dope. Perhaps my favorite non battle verse from spyder. Dude, that was sick. I never thought of our complaints towards your writtens like that an all but for real that was nice. That alliteration line was dirty too.

Silver, your verse started ehh and got really good. The number one cumbersome line was nice dude, rhymes and flowed quite well. This was easily my favorite piece from you two as a group. Good shit mane.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Francesco » Apr 29th, '13, 00:13

Just Silver wrote:glad u enjoyed it guy


You're welcome guy!
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Spyder » Apr 29th, '13, 01:30

Thanks for the feed guys
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Francesco » Apr 29th, '13, 01:36

Spyder wrote:Thanks for the feed guys


Anytime Spy... :y:
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Mr Change » Apr 30th, '13, 18:01

Pretty great. Two things I like most from your verses,

Spyder- Love how you got personal, plus how smooth it is was impressive
Favorite line:
"I've line rhymed, strung some syllables so smooth
Inners, alliteration, lyrics in relations with the pro-tools."


Just Silver- You rhymed your tail off I gotta say, and you had several punches I recognized on first read
Favorite line:
"Couldn't fit, a visual,ignorant as Mystikal but more listenable
I progressed here's a list for you i'll start with the typical"


Keep it up guys :y:
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Just Listen

Postby Just Silver » Apr 30th, '13, 18:11

Thanks guy look out for the Tr tape :y:
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