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01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tape.2]

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01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tape.2]

Postby Eedee » May 13th, '13, 02:46

LoF

Beat

DESPERADOES
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PainKiller

CATASTROPHIC
DGAF
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SINISTER SYNDICATE
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I believe that int-rest in cousins leads to incest (ughh)
An breads mistresses who post nudes of me on Pintrest
So breathe the incense and release your inhibitions
At least we're interesting, you lead to indescision
I need an intermission. where the fuck is Painkiller
Your music is brain killer, you're stuck, the same filler
We're like propane here to come and light shit up
I should have told Pain to ghostwrite this, fuck

Bold statement CP since I write with the attitude that most might diss but
This no name kid got a baby face that pretty hoes might kiss,
shucks
Plus I got the strength to lift a fucker who weighs a ton, and rampage
It's my way of fun, so say your prayers son when I let loose my damn rage
Don't mean to cause damage, it's just the weed CP gave me was synthetic
I needed a high but now I'm hurting with the same pain found in headaches
So somebody call the medics 'fore the desperadoes start a massacre
So duck when the blasts occur, cuz we shoot and don't miss that's for sure


I might cypher like I'm Mike Myers --slay girls
Seize her with my nice writing like I live in Wayne's world

Wake up, it's crunch-time, I piss in your bowl, yup,
Watch you scrunch your face eatin' Cinnamon Toast YUCK!!

Go nuts, I'ma milk it like a farmer would
Slow up... kinda pinch it tight, won't harm it, could -
It? Nah, utter spitting like the artists should
Here's a tip for you cows, we're in the light like Martin's hood.
Catastrophic plant the seed and now it seems you're on a limb
Branching out, planned to sprout but the tree was falling quick

If you leave it up to us, we can blossom from the ground
Into a beautiful "who would think", how awesome is our sound?

But the problem that we found is the root of it all
The winds of change may sway us, but your movement is wrong.
Music is all we have so we have to be sicker, more,
We're Redwoods, you fickle whore, you're just a paltry palm tree.

I dumbed it down for ya but I think its time to heat it up,
When I ‘dent-ure mouth’ cause you couldn’t keep it shut.
My Vantage Point an ad-vantage, their battle verse be
Already dead but acting like a beast, must be taxidermy!
So why did ya… come here we don’t com-pare, so fuck tryin
I am, ones fears the blood smears I’m just violent
When Spy drops its Cyclops eclipsed with one eye lid, (nah)
I mean I leave you like your game, its one sided!
Wait, did I say I’m the dude one sides-with, get the shit I’m on
Silver and Spyder are more than two peas, in an iPod!

Makin em sweat like free throws cut off the feet bones
Cookin through these peop-le till there blood pops mesquite toes
Defeat foes with the ease, my easel draws the L , picture p
Still hard to tell,i do it sinister-ly as Hell, mention me we will prevail
Indefinitely were set to sail they fail to see like sets of brail
Your blindness and two sided ness were tighter than a hymen is
A fighter that puts his life in it, infinitely climbing limbs to triumph it
Were just scientists mixing up antidotes we get it popping like a can of coke
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Re: 01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tap

Postby Just Silver » May 13th, '13, 02:59

Hell yea they all look really good
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Re: 01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tap

Postby Eedee » May 13th, '13, 09:13

Word. This was nice.
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Re: 01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tap

Postby Spyder » May 13th, '13, 19:06

good shit
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Re: 01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tap

Postby Just Silver » May 13th, '13, 19:48

I need to step my vocab up but i liked my flow
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Re: 01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tap

Postby Spyder » May 13th, '13, 21:11

bigray wrote:
Just Silver wrote:I need to step my vocab up but i liked my flow


Someone on TR gave me a good way too step up my vocab and it worked....look for different words to use using synonyms...instead of using the word "paper" think of different words to use that mean the same thing and sound better.


didnt i tell you that
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Postby Just Silver » May 13th, '13, 22:29

Hell ya good advice :y:
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Re: 01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tap

Postby PAINKILLƎR » May 13th, '13, 23:11

Desperadoes - still ill with skills that kill

Catastrophic - wtf is up with this back n forth shit? nah im playing I loved it, yoiu guys go off each other really nice your chemistry is incredible and it shows. Rhyming was really good, flowed great, some dope lines, great verse.

Sinister Syndicate - Dope verse, showing a lot of versatility, prolly the most in the whole cypher. rhyming was great, flow was good, a lot of clever lines. Fun read. Great drop.

Cool cypher. It was fun. :b:
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Re: 01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tap

Postby CanadaPure » May 13th, '13, 23:47

Goddammit Catastrophic. Who the fuck goes back and forth in a cypher?

I will fucking murder you both
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Re: 01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tap

Postby Mr.DGAF » May 14th, '13, 00:52

Geno wrote:
CanadaPure wrote:Goddammit Catastrophic. Who the fuck goes back and forth in a cypher?

I will fucking murder you both

Ego wannabes



Geno's gonna be....dead
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Postby Just Silver » May 14th, '13, 00:52

Time to get prepared for the next one :y:
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Re: 01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tap

Postby Eedee » May 14th, '13, 01:27

Everyone mad we back and forth in a GROUP cypher. :laughing:
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Re: 01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tap

Postby Spyder » May 14th, '13, 01:32

Eedee wrote:Everyone mad we back and forth in a GROUP cypher. :laughing:


i think theyre saying that usually a cypher already means back and forth, just singly...

but idc LOL
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Postby Eedee » May 14th, '13, 01:33

Who gives a flying fuck, seriously? Are there rules to say you can't go back and forth in a cypher?

For fuck sake, it's a group cypher anyway. You have a group/partner, fucking show your chemistry. That's what DGAF and I did.
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Re: 01. Group Cypher, Man (Desp. & Cat. & Sin. Syn.) [TR.Tap

Postby PAINKILLƎR » May 14th, '13, 01:41

Nobody got mad, carry on.
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