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Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jul 29th, '13, 22:28

LoF

Listen school is back in session n it's something you should be investin' in
Drooling bad I don't think you know who you messin' with, who you testin' shit
How you gonna diss me when you're the one who loves a little runt who plenty rate as bones
And it's said in stone when I say that she's no competition for a women who's 28 and grown
Keepin' it big picture, none of that fickle cunt sitcom for 11 year olds
You're too old to watch that shit homie that shit right theres for weirdos
The type of power that Yelawolf's beard holds... Scarlett possesses
Ariana's appearance has no essence, So what's wrong dawg you got no senses?
You could go for gold but you settle with just silver, fucking pathetic
Very bold of you to fall in love with a tiny chimp faced bitch, yup ugly Jhenétics
I'm all in for goddesses not the type of girls you'd find in the playground
I'm not being modest, but your logic is bore, can I have someone new to slay now?
It'll be a safe transaction, I'm easy to pay pal, So who will it be?
Ay, one faggot did try to step up to Watson, that's just silly G
I can't believe it's Demaz's fucking cousin I have to box with, Oh well
They both have have a lot in common for instance their records will won't sell


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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jul 29th, '13, 22:35

Lmao dope shit bru

if anybody needs me to explain my lines I'll do so. I can assure you they all make sense though lol.
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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby Spyder » Jul 29th, '13, 22:36

@Hage, i realize the are jokey pieces so im not too concerned. but that LOF wouldnt fly on a regular piece yaheard?
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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jul 29th, '13, 22:37

Spyder wrote:@Hage, i realize the are jokey pieces so im not too concerned. but that LOF wouldnt fly on a regular piece yaheard?

Yo my shit was straight up fire, this ain't no joke!
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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jul 29th, '13, 22:39

I have a feeling nobody is properly gonna feed our shit lol
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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Jul 29th, '13, 23:19

Hahahaha "thus betraying me".

Pain wins doe, actually had some disses up in this bitch. Hate was ehhh, coulda come a little harder than that you nahimsayin. But all in all, Emma Stone wins.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jul 29th, '13, 23:59

Lmao I was dead @ that degenerate line, damn bruh going at my chompers like that. whew

Thanks DGAF and bigray!
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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby Just Silver » Jul 30th, '13, 00:21

lol at the jhenetics line good shit i think pain got this one
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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby Eedee » Jul 30th, '13, 03:16

Lol what the fuck?

Pain had some great lines and felt he made his structurally better. Hage was funny too though, nahimean?

Pain wins this one doe.

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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jul 30th, '13, 03:25

Eedee wrote:Lol what the fuck?

Pain had some great lines and felt he made his structurally better. Hage was funny too though, nahimean?

Pain wins this one doe.

whew somebody tried to step to Emma brother so I was like naw son nahmean, threw some jabs cuz I'm the diss police, and shawts are fired like pewpewpew

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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jul 30th, '13, 04:16

Poverty bars at their finest whew
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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby Eedee » Jul 30th, '13, 06:33

Like pew pew
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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby J.R. » Jul 30th, '13, 21:10

Wow...that was... wow.

Fave line was honestly the opening, not cause of any meaning, just the rhymes.

Listen school is back in session n it's something you should be investin' in
Drooling bad I don't think you know who you messin' with, who you testin' shit
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Re: Pain vs Hage (Dedicated to Scarlett) (Underrated Thread)

Postby Trimss » Aug 7th, '13, 14:56

:whewwwwwwww: Painkiller fucking went in, he handed you an L.
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