Inspired by some of my favourite rappers, fellow members and Scarlett, powerful.
Would appreciate some feed, first solo piece of mine that I actually like.
Link of Feed
[Verse 1]
No friends, this ends, your heads take 'em and mark it as targets
Explosive as supernova Scarlett that's as hot as any movie star gets
So place your bets! but don't dare to ask "who's he boy"
Try Bruce Lee Roy, with lyrics and flows that de-stroy
and punches that'll leave you with a swollen face
With words that I hold in place strong enough to rip a hole in space
Just skilled, I can bench press a plane and parallel park a train
Take your brain on a ride like a carousel, start the game
Spark a flame, y'all gonna respond? they reply "Yes we are!"
Then they don't... I guess that;s just the affect of SPR
[Hook}
In this world I'm so alone
In a category all on my own
Cause I tell the world what I want to
Yea I tell the world what I want to
Man I feel so alone
They treat me like an outcast
Cause I tell the world what I want to
But you can't tell me what you gon do
[Verse 2]
Oh boy, I saw what you did, c'mon you couldn't rap to stay alive but
Shit that's okay since every time you try to spit you choke on your own saliva
That's why you took a dive bruh, but not like my other homie
It's to bad the harmless Rolly is about as worthless as a armless goalie
So heartless, hold me, naw forget it couldn't care less if you're not feelin' it
When I voice my opinions, they're just opinions, c'mon son deal wit it
Real shit get thrown while wack shit praised, c'mon the bar should be raised
Everybody talks crazed, dudes just cock faced losers that need to be in scorched flames
Wooooah! Somebody go and get the NSA so they can capture everything that menace say
Yo, don't take my shit too literal, just say it cuz no one wants to hear rap when it's gray
But listen when I say, Ray, Silver, Rolly and everybody else writing a diss
I'm coming for blood, and based if you come at me, it'll be you resting in piss
Goddamn!!! I'm just riding with dark horse through the jaws of death
I'm just too in love with fatal attractions, I always enjoy sinking my claws in threats
Then reply faster than supersonic flying jets, This shit is just mine for the takin'
Stuff you all in a oven that I bake in, it's been known this is my awakenin'
[Hook x2]
In this world I'm so alone
In a category all on my own
Cause I tell the world what I want to
Yea I tell the world what I want to
Man I feel so alone
They treat me like an outcast
Cause I tell the world what I want to
But you can't tell me what you gon do
Fuck dude, I loved this shit.
bamasweat:
You took a major leap coming into this one imo, good stuff.
