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When the music stops Verse

Postby Ricardo28 » Aug 5th, '13, 21:32

Who else thinks em verse is :worship: ?
The flow, lyrics, the diss I love it

If I, were to die murdered in cold blood tommorrow
Would you feel sorrow or show love, or would it matter?
Could never be the lead-off batter
If there ain't shit for me to feed off, I'm see-saw battling
But there's way too much at stake for me to be fake
There's too much on my plate, I done came way
Too far in this game to turn and walk away
And not say what I got to say
What the fuck you take me for a joke? You smoking crack?
'Fore I do that, I'd beg Mariah to take me back
I'll get up 'fore I get down, run myself in the ground
'Fore I put some wack shit out
And try to smack this one out the park, five-thousand mark
Y'all steady trying to drown a shark
Ain't gon' do nothing but piss me off, lid to the can of whip-ass
Just twist me off, see me leap out, pull a piece out
Fuck shooting I'm just trying to knock his teeth out
Fuck with me now bitch, let's see you freestyle
Talk is cheap, motherfucker if you really feeling froggish leap
Yo Slim, you gon' let him get away with that?
He tried to play you, you can't let him 'scape with that
Man I hate this crap
This ain't rap, this is crazy the way we act
When we confuse hip-hop with real life when the music stops
There's a certain mystique when I speak, that you notice
Cause it's sort of unique cause you know it's me
My poetry's deep, and I'm stillmatic, the way I flow to this beat
You can't sit still, it's like trying to smoke crack and go to sleep
I'm strapped, it's known any minute I could snap
I'm the equivalent of what would happen if Bush rapped
I bully these rappers so bad lyrically
It ain't even funny, I ain't even hungry, it ain't even money
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Re: When the music stops Verse

Postby SoldierShady » Aug 5th, '13, 22:59

Kinda underrated if you ask me. I wish he could just rap like that these days
"So one last time, I'm back, 'fore it fades into black and it's all over, behold the final chapter in the saga, trying to recapture that lightning trapped in a bottle twice, the magic that started it all...tragic portrait of an artist tortured....trapped in his own drawings..." - Bruce.

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Re: When the music stops Verse

Postby Ricardo28 » Aug 6th, '13, 04:35

SoldierShady wrote:Kinda underrated if you ask me. I wish he could just rap like that these days


What is the problem of nowadays style? still good :y:

May be this album something like this... whos knows?
There's a certain mystique when I speak, that you notice
Cause it's sort of unique cause you know it's me
My poetry's deep, and I'm stillmatic, the way I flow to this beat
You can't sit still, it's like trying to smoke crack and go to sleep
I'm strapped, it's known any minute I could snap
I'm the equivalent of what would happen if Bush rapped
I bully these rappers so bad lyrically
It ain't even funny, I ain't even hungry, it ain't even money
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Re: When the music stops Verse

Postby Francesco » Aug 6th, '13, 13:40

Menzo wrote:Very tightly written verse. Wouldn't mind an album with that style.


This... I love the verse... the song is aight too but not as great though
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Re: When the music stops Verse

Postby Mathers » Aug 6th, '13, 21:05

Miller wrote:His verse is great but I dont really like the rest of the song.
Fuck top five, bitch, I'm top four
And that includes Biggie and Pac, whore
And I got an Evil Twin
So who the fuck do you think that third and that fourth spot's for?
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Re: When the music stops Verse

Postby superman11 » Aug 6th, '13, 21:25

He needs to just pretend he's still fighting for something, he needs to sound hungry like this again. One of his best verses.
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Re: When the music stops Verse

Postby HugoDhs » Aug 11th, '13, 03:14

Menzo wrote:Very tightly written verse. Wouldn't mind an album with that style.

+1. Plus Swifty and Proof's part are just mindblowing.
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But in the long run, these drugs are probably going
To catch up sooner or later but fuck it, I'm on one
So let's enjoy

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Let's smoke for better times!
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Re: When the music stops Verse

Postby RayMcTechGuy » Aug 11th, '13, 05:56

I like how it starts off sorta slow like he's holding back a little, and then BAMN!
"It's just me, you and the music now, Slim, I hope you hear it!"
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Re: When the music stops Verse

Postby Just Silver » Aug 11th, '13, 12:55

whats the 5000 mark line mean
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Re: When the music stops Verse

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Aug 11th, '13, 16:44

The rhyming isn't as good as it can be.
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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Re: When the music stops Verse

Postby Shuttle Destroyer » Aug 18th, '13, 07:43

Amazing verse, energetic as hell
I like Bizzy's part a lot too. I find to be very creative the way he takes the listener to a ride throughout some advices music has given him and the consequences it brough to his life
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Re: When the music stops Verse

Postby Bugs » Aug 19th, '13, 07:11

Great verse I just wish he would have had more verses on the song, taken out D12. I would given it a better rating than 7/10
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I feel like when I bend over backwards for you all you do is laugh
Cause that ain't good enough you expect me to fold myself in half till I snap
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