Hail Mary '13 (RIP Pain and Rolly)

[Never_Enough]

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=162766&p=2273403#p2273403
If it's not enough, second LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=162888&p=2278376#p2278376




PUBLIC SERVICE ANNOUNCEMENT:
- The death threats present in these lyrics are pure entertainment, and they are not to be taken literally. Never_Enough is not going to kill anyone mentioned here.
Plus, he still got love for his homies Rolly and Pain, even though they mentioned him in their lyrics without any good reason.
Last but not least, he is contemplating the uploading of the audio version of the track, regardless his bad pronunciation and even worse mic.
Anything else?
- Yeah, diss me.


Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=51JC2F-FfZ4
Audio: http://vocaroo.com/i/s09SGXj1ofIy (I decided to upload it, keep in mind that English isn't my first language, my mic sucks, plus Vocaroo fucked up the quality even more. I'm not putting this in the Audio Section because I'm just fucking around. This link is just let you know what the flow and everything is like).

Never Enough in this
Kill TR-ILLUMINATI
You gon get killed, you and yo buddy

haha
Let's go

Follow me, Pain's dying,
homies run quick see
if Rolly wasn't here, nobody would ride with ya
la la la la la la la la
X2

You claim you a killa but I'll push ya
Pain is a corny name and you never get no pussy
You try to get your words to be quoted, my gun is loaded
Seems like this beef shit, you can't avoid it
Now pray to god Emma and Ellie aren't listening
They'll never marry you or acknowledge your existence
Now pay attention homie
please brother
here I go
I'm so fucking ill
You'd need the whole TR just to par up with my skill
In real life you just a poor guy who screams
In the dark, with no friends
aside from Rolly
who's jealous of SajN Benz
stop playing with that pen and fight like men
Y'all dissing me back? fuckers I ain't scared
you try to find my house, bitches I ain't there
Y'all writing about me you know I don't care
You can't compete in this affair
Now stop playing with this rap game and go back to your teddy bears

Follow me, if Pain and Rolly wanna battle me
y'all better come prepared, or I'll kill both of y'all
la la la la la la la la
X2

[Never_Enough]

Thanks homie, it was my first time writing a full english verse

[Notalius]

I had to make my own flow so it sounds good xD .. a lot of forced rhymes xD but good

[Never_Enough]

I uploaded the audio link, it's in OP.
I'm not putting it in audio stage because I was just fucking around, the quality sucks, and I'm not a good rapper lol.

[PAINKILLƎR]

"Never gets no pussy" that's a double negative. So that means I do get some, thanks for recognizing that.

Although you got me with this...

Now pray to god Emma and Ellie aren't listening
They'll never marry you or acknowledge your existence

good work m8

[Never_Enough]

"Never gets no pussy" that's a double negative. So that means I do get some, thanks for recognizing that.

I was sure you would have said it, but "you'll ever get no pussy" didn't sound good

Anyway I still love you bruh

[PAINKILLƎR]

"Never gets no pussy" that's a double negative. So that means I do get some, thanks for recognizing that.

I was sure you would have said it, but "you'll ever get no pussy" didn't sound good

Anyway I still love you bruh

No doubt bruh, I checked that audio and was pleasantly surprised, your English is crisp, and the flow was smooth you didn't really stumble or anything. It made this piece way better because of it really. Great drop.

[Mr.DGAF]

Feed's coming....

[Mr.DGAF]

....almost there....

[Mr.DGAF]

I actually felt this a lot more after hearing it in audio. You did a pretty damn good job of mimicking Pac's flow for a non-English native speaker. Plus the line about Emma and Ellie not acknowledging their existence was sick haha. Not bad man, not bad at all.

[Eedee]

Jesus Christ DGAF. That triple post. LOL

Anyway, this was pretty solid. That Emma/Ellie line though.

[PAINKILLƎR]

I'm pretty sure I'll meet Ellie in the near future.

[Eedee]

I'm pretty sure I'll meet Ellie in the near future.

................... I couldn't post that with a straight face.

[PAINKILLƎR]

I'm pretty sure I'll meet Ellie in the near future.

................... I couldn't post that with a straight face.

Read 'em and weep when I get that picture with bruh.

[Eedee]

I'm rootin' for ya mane