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Jokes Drunk and High

Postby Broken Beats » Sep 3rd, '13, 05:23

so you drake and wayne take over my brain try to drive my train Marshalls my true chain flame it was a fun game boys but your nothing compared to my toys you fools cant touch my tools go back to old school you gonna end up mules amd no your fire has no fuel last time i tell you to stay out the gates nevemind fates bitch meets slates of slab for you undead assss barried under grass covererd in plastic task trash splash mashed crashed did not pass taylor gay died anyway sirens to loud cant reach my clouds no ones proud of that twit phianna wanna kill god for say what the fuck jamican patty you fucking your daddy crooked i says group rap im not in to that minne me says touch no hoes minnie me says keep up the sweet flows minnie me says touch no pose keep on your clothes
please guys no accurse no curses no auric weasles nevermind wewe measles bind peace find east destroy feminne's trying to be like jenn A nnys pedo hunt on the front nasty stunt hurting babies feeding as if their lunch never mind a punch lock jaw crunched in a press excuse of a anatomy slashed madly please help me find them before theres proof that guys way more then just a meanass goof hes a pedomile trying to kilometerdial to my child through technology bullshit
who are these men ??? Where are the women ? why do children hurt ? how can you heal that dirt:??? Telported it from earth to satans experiment i SAY take the brain dead form away never again to see our light of day lucy lifts you up jesus never gives up and god is odd sick in his way sure you wanna play his failsafe way broke his system screwing with his glisting lights evil rays toady infected with reptile dogs reptiled frogs and fuck joes in a hog or was it joell its hard to tell damn niggers went and lost them wings and fell who the hell will tell them now how to fix their shit if matilda isnt getting her money hits reapped you 5 pieces one to go her mother aint no hoe, sweet and slow took her time stole all your rhymes should of said your ride is on the rag but hey dotn go brag you got an insta tag into your lovign hag HOT AWESOME GORGEOUS yes you know willow told you so baby bilbes to go mobile cds and tonnes of memories im bored now bye xoxox
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Re: Jokes Drunk and High

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 3rd, '13, 05:30

Heroin is one hell of a drug I hear
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Re: Jokes Drunk and High

Postby Mr.DGAF » Sep 3rd, '13, 05:40

Yo, fix ya beats and post a link of feed.

But forreal dude, you gotta structure this a little better. Just looks like a paragraph nahimean (unless that's what you were going for). Separate them into bars, helps the reader discern a flow.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Jokes Drunk and High

Postby Broken Beats » Sep 3rd, '13, 05:54

weed only thks i wrote it for marshy lol not ever gonna take it farther then that chessy raps stay tuned took over mms
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Re: Jokes Drunk and High

Postby SajN » Sep 3rd, '13, 13:15

Please read this: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=99315
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