MC Horsebot - "GOAT"

by **Just Silver** » Sep 20th, '13, 22:49

some unique style u got i also liked how u explained lines as you would in a battle
flow was ok but that miley line sorta was a force

phrasing is what stood out lots of sporadic ideas i liked

the first few lines drew me in

just a little advice sometimes a big vocabulary within certain lines just feel off most of it felt natural
but when flow dipped it was iffy

overall your definitely not bad and i like the style u should post some more we need CW support :y:

by **Eedee** » Sep 21st, '13, 12:34

Hmmmm, this was interesting, to say the least haha.

You had some multis in there at times, other times it felt like you were going for just constant vowel sounds.

The flow was really not here, it felt like. I couldn't find it. The structure was weird, some lines long as hell while the others were short. Not sure where you were going flow-wise.

This part had a nice flow to it for sure:

Beat up Paul with a Wal-Mart discounted waffle press
And stole Marshall’s seven digits and his fucking home address

And yes, you do love your references. :smoking: