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Backstage (keystyle)

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Backstage (keystyle)

Postby Just Silver » Oct 2nd, '13, 18:41

feed *demons by halftongue cant copy n paste

Anythings a go ,start a TR free-for-all, drugs and tits
Bottles and the time and date u swallowed it
Other topics on it as daily accomplishments
And older dirty members dont wanna be bothered with
So ill put up a tolerance creativity has fallen quick
So i light up like a wick and write what hasnt been written
Skin white as shit like what E.Gs been spitten
Its too easy to be different from Trimss Sajn and Bigray
simply discussing slim and sayin have a nice day
Id rather kick it like Pain but not be "black n white"
Pickin outfits like E.G "ill go black tonight"
Easily im the antichrist this art-i-choke like vegetable
Sajns bros a fruit and no bread as a stepping stone
So im really starving, this sections been left alone
Yet everyday and every moment the last post stays goin
And we post about anything things we really shouldnt
Private matters what were cookin havin sex watchya doin too
In fact ive learned some shit about Kill You
He got pissed someone addressed his bitch issues
relax this isnt a diss im just bored with the spittle
Im drooling in boredom only true one to word it
Verses are my verdict stay cooler than a thermos
Through threads like tailors and posted like mail trucks
I "assault" most of ya like a snail or slug
Im manning up like broncos when mannings up
Im in backstage i cant adjust or understand the hands crushed
Of the writers we used to have some good timing
All cohesive but im the silver lining
So if we need a break backstage you can find me
Backspace you can find these
Rolly Slik Pain and Eedee hiding
Lurking chatting about fucking twerking or adolescent virgins
Some chats have their purpose but most dont
So my verses arent direct like morse code
You gotta decode that shit reflow that shit
Smoke dope so you can get known to it
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Re: Backstage (keystyle)

Postby SajN » Oct 2nd, '13, 19:00

I liked reading it. It flows nice and you have som good rhyming. I am not so good at getting every punch right away, but I see some, and they're cool.

Smh at calling my bro a fruit yo.
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Re: Backstage (keystyle)

Postby Just Silver » Oct 2nd, '13, 20:01

Menzo wrote:I like your style man, flows nice.

thanks guy :y:
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Re: Backstage (keystyle)

Postby SajN » Oct 2nd, '13, 20:22

He gets a thank, and I don't? Da fuck son.
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Re: Backstage (keystyle)

Postby Just Silver » Oct 2nd, '13, 20:34

SajN wrote:He gets a thank, and I don't? Da fuck son.

thank u too :smoking: we need another collab

yea i had some strange punches rather than my usual
but youll pick up on it after a while
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