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The Return and Disappearance of Fa-Q

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The Return and Disappearance of Fa-Q

Postby Fa-Q » Oct 19th, '13, 16:31

Oh man, my cock just bloomed,
It exploded with a rocket's ploom,
This fucking sock is doomed,
Plus I'm in the ladies locker room,
I raped a girl, let's see if she can stop a broom,
Well your ex wife, is my next wife,
when we finally get to the the next life,
But I sure as fuck won't have your sex life,
Her pussy's burning, her crotch is third degree,
She digs my foreskin, after the botched surgery,
I took her ass virginity like a watched burglary,
Don't even fuckin' tell me you've not heard of me,
She's always loved my perky maaaaan tits,
After all of this, she makes a turkey sandwich,
I came on her sweater, and got the fleece so pregnant,
Made a sex tape, and only released a segment,
In the middle of it, her knees and leg's bent,
Pound til her puss was purple, like a piece of egg plant,
Now as a rhymer, I am strong and tough,
But I'm sure this is gone on long enough,
Just remember, I was once king here,
Now, I'm looking what these new cats bring here,



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Re: The Return and Disappearance of Fa-Q

Postby Francesco » Oct 19th, '13, 16:40

Damn I knew you're gonna come back even after you told me you're done with writing/rapping!
Nice piece homie... :y:
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Re: The Return and Disappearance of Fa-Q

Postby Just Silver » Oct 19th, '13, 17:34

pretty decent would definitely like to see a non sexual piece/ somethin more serious

but overall its good rhyming good to have u back :worship:

now i gotta look up ploom lol new word for me
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Re: The Return and Disappearance of Fa-Q

Postby Spyder » Oct 23rd, '13, 21:04

this was pretty funny, good to see your still writing occasionally. but some of the syllable counts were off and it threw off the flow a bit. other than that i wont make the piece out to be more than it supposed to be. hopefully you come back and write some topicals and what not. good lookin
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