Suicide Music

[Eedee]

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Instrumental: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rL0eMG14cR4

Please read this spoken-word/poem to the instrumental. It won't work if it's not playing in the background... Thank you


The past is where my demons dwell,
But even there they seem to creep into my present mind.
I wish I could tell you I've never lied,
But then that would make the phrase itself a fucking paradox
Of scary thoughts,
I open my mouth but I can barely talk...
I would change everything if I could,
I'm sorry - a page ripped from the rhyme book
Falls to the floor
This is the same ship that I was told wouldn't sink
But like rock in the ocean,
It falls to the floor.
The shadows in the room used to scare me as a kid,
But that was barely what it is,
Because now that I'm older
I can't sleep because of the shadows of my past
Seem to challenge me at last,
I drift.
I sit crying with a deep mind,
I slip silent into sleep, right...
But what'll happen when I wake up?
What'll happen when the day comes
Where I have to atone for all the burdens I put on you?
What is the purpose of good 'ole truth
If I have to tell you a million lies before you realize
That the truth was hidden amongst the rattle snakes and raps I say?
Battlefield pockmarks have made my heart rock hard,
The only thing that can save me is a dark star,
Placed strategically between a supernova and a black hole
By the Hand of God himself.
He just wants me to suffer,
See that cloud?
That's his smile shining down on you and a frown on everything I do.
We could've had a beach-front,
I should've prefaced all this with the fact I've had some shit to drink
I think...
It's time to say goodbye for now.
I'm sure we'll see each other again.
After all, we both have had our share of sins.
I wished I could've gotten you and I through it,
But all I hear now is this suicide music...

Good night.

[VintageSlimBish]

Lol go kill yourself


You need to learn to write a lot better tho
Keep it up
Add more emotion and intelligence
Ull get it bronojoke

[TRickster]

You got skills.

[Eedee]

Thanks. (Bump lol)